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I am an international student studying linguistics and English teaching in Sydney. I have experience in teaching English and Japanese. My strengths are in teaching Japanese speaking (I have taught speaking in Japanese HSC exams in Sydney) and teaching English. (exam preparation especially IELT and grammar). I can help you to study English more effectively.
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    IELTS Writing2 :Technology Question: Rapid technological change has changed the world we live in. While computers and mobile devices have many obvious benefits, they have made people forget what is really important in life and are ruining society. To what extent do you agree? My essay: Over the last few decades, technology has developed greatly, and has had massive influences on our society. Some people argue that technological devices have a long-term negative impact to us. This essay will show how they have been harmful to our lives. One of the problems computers and mobile devices have brought is in the diluted human relationship. While these means of communication have facilitated instant and interpersonal communication, they have weakened our close connection to each other, thereby undermining the quality of communication. For example, social networking sites make us feel as if we actually met or had a conversation with our friends. However, this is only a virtual get-together, and consequently we have lost opportunities for face-to-face communication. It is true that there are some people who are plagued by cyber-sickness or loneliness due to addictive use of online-based communication tools. Another affect of such technology is it has made some things too easy and simple, and therefore we are gradually forgetting some significant skills. For instance, an increasing number of people take advantage of mobile applications to use a map instead of printed ones. This is very useful because it can navigate us to the destination. Nevertheless, as a result, many of us especially young generations will often have difficulties reading a paper-based map. This might cause them some serious issues when they have to reach a place without any help from technological devices. In conclusion, modern technology such as computers and mobile phones has largely been a blessing. However, despite this, they have caused grave deterioration of human’s communication and skills to handle various traditional tools. --------- There might be a lot of mistakes in the use of article. I would appreciate it if it is checked particularly. Thank you!
    July 3, 2017
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    IELTS writing: Problems and solutions of declining birth rates and aging society Recently, birth rates have gradually declined and the development of medical technology has accelerated the aging of the society especially in developed countries. Consequently, this is likely to cause some social issues. This essay will argue some of them and countermeasures against the problems. Firstly, unbalanced population will collapse the pension system. It would be a huge burden for a small number of young generations to support a large abs increasing number of elderly people financially. If this happens, young workers will have to be plagued by the duty of expensive pension, with worries about their uncertain future because they might not be able to receive as much money as they will pay. However, this can be prevented if the birth rate is improved and there are more workers who do not need financial help. To realize this, the government should enhance the child-raring systems so that parents can afford to have more children. In addition, riding the retirement age might be effective to allow seniors to work long. Secondly, declining birth rates will cause serious shortage of the working population. This may affect the country’s economy since lack of labor will often lead to decrease of productivity. If companies will try to maintain their competitiveness, this will end up imposing enormous workload to their employees. However, there are some strategies to combat this issue. One is to abolish retirement system. In fact, there are many people who want to continue their job as long as they can. Another remedy is to install technological devices to entrust part of work to them. It is true that some robots are playing an important role on nursing homes instead of human staffs. To sum up, declining birth rates and aging society are grave problems in many countries, but some of them can be solved. This might be too long and those ideas may sound unpersuasive. I would be very grateful if someone can give me another viewpoint about this issue! Thank you very much!
    June 26, 2017
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    IELTS writing : Should extreme sports be banned because they are too dangerous? There is a growing tendency for people to enjoy extreme sports as their leisure. However, these activities are highly dangerous, and some people insist that they should be prohibited. This essay will argue that people should have the rights to experience extreme sports as they like and to offer these opportunities for business. First, if the government bans these sports, it would have a negative impact on tourism. Nowadays it has become more popular to add such an activity in their trip schedule. Providing these opportunities is significant source of income for the local people. For instance, in some resorts, scuba diving is one of the most attractive activities especially for young adults. In winter, some people living in the mountain make their living by running a skiing ground or working as a skiing instructor. Considering these things, banning these sports would lead not only to limiting people’s pleasure but also to loss of job chances. Second, it is difficult to make rules to control extreme sports. There are various kinds of sports in the world, and most of them have risks of injury to some extent. Thus, there is no distinctive difference in the level of danger. Any attempts to establishing laws of prohibition would end up in vain. Creating rules to ensure the safety should be more realistic and effective. In conclusion, even though extreme sports are somewhat perilous, banning them is an unrealistic solution regarding the popularity and the impact on economy. In my opinion, the government does not need to forbid them as long as they are regulated by law moderately to protect people and the environment. *I would like to know if there are words which can be changed to other high-level words, or if you have another opinion about this topic. This topic was hard for me, so I didn't come up with any concrete supportive ideas. Thank you.
    June 9, 2017
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    IELTS essay : The adcantages and disadvantages of the Internet In recent times, the Internet has become more popular over the last few decades. It has brought enormous changes to our society. This essay will focus on both benefits and drawbacks of the Internet. Obviously, it enables us to live more efficiently. We use it for various purposes; from personal ones to public ones. Online shopping is one example. Without walking around what we need, it can be delivered to our house. This saves us a large amount of time. Secondly, the Internet has significant roles in business. For instance, webpages are powerful media for companies to advertise themselves. Especially for young generations, adverts shown in social networking services are overwhelmingly influential, which contribute to larger consume with fewer costs and resources compared to fliers or TV commercials. On the other hand, the widespread of the Internet has brought some harm to us. It can be denied that the number of criminals related to it has rapidly increased. This causes theft of personal information or illegal accesses to classified data of public organizations. Moreover, the threat of cyber-attacks has been greater. As the latest news, some people were swindled by means of fake viruses. To sum up, it is clear that there are pros and cons of using the Internet, but in the current climate, the merits outweigh the demerits. In my opinion, the internet is likely to grow in its popularity in the future. We need to use it carefully and monitor the negative aspects at the same time.
    May 29, 2017
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