"I feel like I've gone into labor in my throat" = He is saying that it is very intense (he was basically saying it was very 매워요. such as child labor. (Which is giving birth to a baby)

Here is the corrected grammar:

I was watching YouTube and I heard the sentence/phrase "I feel like I've gone into labor in my throat". The guy was trying Korean food and he was saying it was literally* hot and intense.

--Maybe 'literally' isn't the best choice of word here :) Maybe 'very' 'extremely' 'really'

I've been on holiday for four days now. (so far)

I'm studied English while watching American drama Modern family.

I studied English while watching Modern Family. (past tense 과거)

I am studying English while watching Modern Family. (present tense 현재)

This drama is very funny.

This show is very funny. (영어로: show/tv show 한국어로: drama)

Is there any one who saw this drama?

Is there anyone who has seen this show?  / Has anyone seen it? 

Please correct this. This sentence I am going to say to my friend

Please correct this so I can say it to my friend./Please correct this because I want to say this to my friend. 

Question: Are we going to have a terrible time tomorrow? / Tomorrow, will we have a terrible time? / Will it be terrible tomorrow? 

Statement: We are going to have a terrible time tomorrow. / Tomorrow, we will have a terrible time. / It will be terrible tomorrow. 

which one is correct please suggest me . and please explain why they are not correct? Tell me how could I tell this sentence in advanced way.

Which one is correct? Please give me suggestions and please explain why they are not correct. Tell me a more advanced example of this sentence. 

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When something is a statement, it may be confusing to add a question mark :) Both are fine without the question mark if you aren't asking a question. 

Something more 'advanced'/'natural': 

"Tomorrow's exam is going to be such a drag"

"I'm dreading tomorrow/tomorrow's exam"/"I'm dreading the exam tomorrow"

you tell me how that feels!!!

You are restrained.
You need do something but you can't.

How suffocating is that? (You might just want to say "It's suffocating")

There are people waiting for me to respond and I can't send a messages to anybody.
I am separated from the people I need to respond to.
What kind of shit is this?!!!

I Want to Make Friends with You

I want to make friends / I want to be your friend / I want to be friends / I want to be friends with you / Let's be friends / I want to make a friend

I want to make friends/ I want to be your friend /  I want to be friends with you

Hi, my name is Elliot. I'm a student from China and I'm now 15 years old. 

I have many hobbies like playing computer games,playing basketball and singing.But my favorite hobby is playing games.^_^

I have many hobbies, like playing computer games (video games is also okay), playing basketball, and singing. But my favorite hobby is playing games. 

I also have many friends in my school.They are all friendly to me and we often play together.But I don't have any foreign friends in other countries.So I want to make foreign friends.

I also have many/a lot of friends at my school. They are all friendly/they are all nice to me and we often play together. But I don't have any foreign friends from other countries, so I want to make some foreign friends. 

I think we can share the happy things with each other or discuss our hobbies.And I think I can make a progress in English.
Would you like to make friends with me?I think we can be best friends.:-)

I think it would be nice to share things that make us happy or discuss our hobbies. And I think it would help me make some progress in English / And I think it would/could help my English.

Would you like to be friends? I think we could be best friends :) 

（Please add my skype email.）

74 day----My friend

I have a friend. (I have this friend) She manages a restaurant. I think, perhaps, she may have modeled before because she was interested in fashion and she is also very beautiful and tall. I like her restaurant, because not only can I eat there, but I can also get other things. It is very small and quiet. I think her style is a little luxurious so I think it's suitable for single men, because they could get a lot of fashion ideas from there. I don't think a fashionable guy would be single for long. Of course though, the delicious food is the most important. (the delicious food is key) I think many (people) will get some feeling from the food(not a natural expression). But I think that her food may be a little expensive haha. If you want to have a nice dinner, you may need to pay more than 50 dollars per person. Even so, I still like her restaurant. I like her magical food. There is a magical taste in her food(there is something magical about her cooking). With the beautiful manager, magical tasting food, and nice decor, I became her fan even though we are friends. But she is a greedy girl (this is only a joke). She always asks for favors from me for her restaurant(business). For example, she asked me to write an article advertising her new food this morning. But I have found it in my heart to do it gladly(? sorry, awkward sentence). Because I shall soon be able to taste her new food. 

Keep up the good work :) 

Let's talk :)

Hey! My name is Daria. I'm a model. English is an important part of my job, so I should improve it(so I would like to improve it). 

I'll be glad to have a conversation with native speakers (but if to be honest it's sooooo difficult for me to understand native speakers) and with people which are learning English.

I would love/like to make conversation(speak with) native speakers (but to be honest(but honestly), it's soooo difficult for me to understand native speakers) and with others who are learning English (as well). 

By the way I can talk to you in Russian if you're trying to learn it :)

And I also want to say that in January I'll be in Hong Kong and it would be super nice if I could find some people from this city(from there would be more natural).

You're doing well :) Although it was nice for the others to correct your entry, their corrections are not that great since they aren't native speakers. Good luck in your studies^^