How I met with my hubby

(If I can get more it helps, you can change my sentences dramatically.) 

If it helps, you can... -> If it is easier for you to do it, you can...
"If I can..., you can..." means something like 私は。。。ができれば、あなたは。。。ができる。
"If I can get more help, you can..." sounds a bit strange, it feels like you mean "you can..." only after "I got more help".

I met my hubby at in a flea market. Back then, I was going to visiting the clinic once a week and during one such visit, I found a poster which advertised that the a flea market is opening at in the same building. I went there after see seeing the doctor that day. 

The flea market was opened for 2 days, it was still a the first day when I went there. I found one a shop who which was opened but the person in charge looked bored, I checked the shop but there were nothing that I want. I checked some other shops and bought a lot of clothes, I got back went home bringing some baggage. Do you mean you bought a baggage to carry the clothes you bought? Or do you mean you went home with a lot of stuff?

After I got back home, I found out that I don't didn't have enough space at in my closet to put in all my clothes in. I got changed replaced my old clothes to with the new clothes I bought, but I couldn't throw away the my old clothes. Back then, I was young and I had never thrown away my clothes before. Because of they were still in a good condition, I could still wear it them if I wanted to, but I have already got new ones so I had regretted it a little. 

The 38th Day

I have a sudden urge to buy a tablet so I went to an electronics retail store.

<em>-"a sudden urge to do something" means something like 急に何かがしたい</em>

<em>-just "tablet" is okay, we don't normally say "tablet terminal" in English</em>

<em></em>...but do I need it?
Actually, I already have a Macbook and an iPhone.
...When will I use it?
But for some reason, I want it!

<em>-"vaguely" means something like "not clear" or あいまい</em>

Hi Santa~!


急にタブレット端末が欲しくなって、ビックカメラに行ってきた。
…いる？
実際、MacとiPhone持ってるし。
いつ使うの？
でも何となく欲しい〜！

サンタさ〜ん！

My holiday plans

I'm going to have a nine days long paid holiday in either January or February.
I can't have it any longer holiday because I'm working at a company now. (I wish I had a two or three months long vacation instead...)
I want to do some experience working in farms or in the nature (such as a rainforests), and I want to stay longer at the destination.
Areas in the Northern Hemisphere would be too cold for me to do some works any nature-related work in the nature in the winter, so I think countries in either Southeast Asia or Oceania would be nice as my a better destination choice.

I have searched for some WWOOF hosts but they are too many of them and it's so hard to choose between them select one from them! And most of them want visitors who will stay longer...
I'm also searching for some tours visiting natural sites but there are plenty of them!

This is my first notebook entry!

Saying "This is my first notebook" kinda sounds like you bought your first notebook.

Hi, I'm Eriko. I'm a Japanese woman living in England now. I've been studying English at an English school. Learning English is fun and I'm enjoying my school days.
I came to arrived in England in June and was surprised that it was so cool in spite of in it being the beginning of summer. In Japan, I got I was used to having hot and humid summers in Japan so I missed the hot summer in Japan there. But now I'm getting used to the weather here and Having a good time. I'm having a good time here now that I'm used to the weather.

It sounds more natural if "now" was omitted. Saying "arrived in England" sounds better and the two sentences sound more natural when connected with an "and". I think it's more common to use "despite" instead of "in spite of" but both are correct. Using "in Japan" at both the beginning and the end of the sentence feels weird so I paraphrased it a bit. Not sure how to correct the underlined sentence so I paraphrased it instead.

I see people from other countries everyday, particularly Europeans. everyday and I'm thinking of visiting Paris in December so I also want to learn French and but I'm also interested in learning Spanish too.

I'll try to write everyday. I'm writing in English now and but I wish I can could write in French or Spanish someday!

It's more natural to connect the "visiting Paris" part with the "learning French" part. The difference between "and" and "but" is that "and" is like an extension while "but" is like an opposing thing. Not really sure how to explain it any better. For example, "I want to learn French and Spanish" means you want to learn both French and Spanish BUT saying "I want to learn French but I also want to learn Spanish" means you want to learn both but you only have time to learn one. From what you wrote, you want to learn French because you want to visit Paris but you're also interested in Spanish, that's why you should use "but" in this case.

I might have missed some stuff here and there but it should be fine for now.