How met with my hubby

(If I can get more helps, It will help me if you can change correct my sentences dynamically.) 

It was too long, had to re-do half of it

After the work, we went to a restaurant and talked a lot. I and the bored looking person who looks bored are lives in Osaka, as I do, another and the third one was a tourist from Tokyo who had stopped here the stop was for to get the tourist's a little money to cover travel expenses. But we can had enjoyed the job operating the stall and the person who looks bored and I decided to open it again. Then In those days I was an office worker, so the job was my second job, but I really enjoyed it because I really got had become really bored with my life and wanted to change it.

A few years later, I married with him. He looks a little happier than before.

return home is better then go back home, arrived home is better than got back home.

You use 'got' too much - got bored = became bored, get money = earn money

How met with my hubby

(If I can get more helps, you can change my sentence dynamically.)

I can completely understand everything you wrote, don't worry about all the yellow. You have some trouble with verb tense and articles and appropriate vocabulary

I met my hubby at a/the flea market. At that time Then I was going to the clinic once a week and found noticed/came across/discovered (found suggest you were looking for it, or else it was lost) a poster which was advertising the opening of a flea market is opening at in the same building. After seeing the doctor I went there.

The flea market is open 2 days each week, it was a the very first day when I went there. I found one shop who open the person (where the owner was looking bored), I checked the shop but there were was nothing that I wanted. Then I checked some other shops and bought a lot of clothes, (cloths and clothes are quite different - I will change all the occurrences) and went got back home bringing carrying any carry bags(?) some baggage.

After got back I arrived home, I found I don't have enough space at in my closet to put in store all the clothes, so I got changed replaced my old clothes to with the new clothes I had bought - but I couldn't throw away the old clothes. Then I was young and I had never thrown away my any clothes which were still wearable , because of condition, I could still wear it if I want, but I already got had new ones. I had felt a little regret a little.

Next day I brought took my old clothes to the flea market. I didn't know how to open shop a stall in the market, so I went to see the person who/whom (these days you don't really need 'whom') I saw had seen (verb tense is a difficult topic) yesterday looking bored, and asked "Could I sell my clothes with you? I will pay the any cost all of here, I don't need to get money though, however; I just can't throw out my clothes..." He just said "I don't know, this shop is my friend's, wait a minute, he'll come back soon" the friend came back almost at once and said "All right, you can use half of the free half of the space" I sold the clothes without price-tags, I couldn't imagine how to put the price them. I said to any customer 'you can decide the price, just a little is okay'. Japanese people didn't get aren't used to getting anything for something free, so most of them payed more over than I had expected/imagined. 

too long

For some reason, I can't fit everything together so I had to split it into two parts.

The next day, I brought my old clothes to the flea market. I didn't know how to open a shop in the market, so I went to see the person who I saw yesterday, the guy who looked bored, and asked "Could I sell my clothes with you? I will pay you the cost all of here, I don't need to get earn any money though, I just can't throw out away my old clothes..." He just said replied "I don't know, this shop is my friend's shop, wait a minute, he'll come back soon." His friend came back at once and said "All right, you can use free half of the space for free." I sold the my clothes without any price, I couldn't imagine how to put the a price on them. I said to told the customers you that they can decide set the price themselves, just even a little is okay. Japanese people didn't get aren't used to getting something things for free, so most of them payed paid more over than I imagined.

After the work the shop closed, we went to a restaurant and talked a lot. I and The person who looked bored and I are both lived in Osaka, another one guy was a tourist from Tokyo, the stop What do you mean? Did the tourist stopped at the restaurant to get his/her travelling expenses? was for getting the tourist's travelling expenses. But we can enjoyed the job selling things so much that and the person who looked bored and I decided to open up the shop it again. Back then I was an office worker so that the job was my second job, but I really enjoyed it because I really got really bored with my life and wanted to change it.

A few years later, I married with him. He looks a little happier than before.

Note: Clothes -> 服、cloth/cloths -> 布。

Interesting story! A bit tiring to correct as it's quite long compared to most other notebook entries. Also, I laughed a bit when I read "don't have enough space at my closet to put in all cloths". Keep practicing! I'm curious as to what happens next, did you quit your office job and work in the shop with your husband now?

How I met with my hubby

(If I can get more it helps, you can change my sentences dramatically.) 

If it helps, you can... -> If it is easier for you to do it, you can...
"If I can..., you can..." means something like 私は。。。ができれば、あなたは。。。ができる。
"If I can get more help, you can..." sounds a bit strange, it feels like you mean "you can..." only after "I got more help".

I met my hubby at in a flea market. Back then, I was going to visiting the clinic once a week and during one such visit, I found a poster which advertised that the a flea market is opening at in the same building. I went there after see seeing the doctor that day. 

The flea market was opened for 2 days, it was still a the first day when I went there. I found one a shop who which was opened but the person in charge looked bored, I checked the shop but there were nothing that I want. I checked some other shops and bought a lot of clothes, I got back went home bringing some baggage. Do you mean you bought a baggage to carry the clothes you bought? Or do you mean you went home with a lot of stuff?

After I got back home, I found out that I don't didn't have enough space at in my closet to put in all my clothes in. I got changed replaced my old clothes to with the new clothes I bought, but I couldn't throw away the my old clothes. Back then, I was young and I had never thrown away my clothes before. Because of they were still in a good condition, I could still wear it them if I wanted to, but I have already got new ones so I had regretted it a little.