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Hi!我是阮锦浩,一位学生,目前主要学习的外语是英语,我希望通过学习英语来跟好的交流!
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    A Letter of Resignation Dear Mr.Wang, Thanks for your appreciation that recruit me as the editor of Design & Fashion. I cherish this opportunity very much. But I'm so sorry that I wish to design from this position. During the two months' working, I found myself could't fit this position since a good editor should equip a necessary quality-creative-which I don't have. I couldn't come up with good ideas. And this embarrassing situation has been haunting me for a while. Please accept my sincere apology for the inconvenience caused from my resignation. Yours truly Li Ming
    November 10, 2018
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    "我有一个梦..."

    我有一个梦。 我希望每个人都能达到他最想达到的目的。对我来说我们常常恐怕害怕失败。有时候有些人恐怕害怕改变他的生活。比如你现在是一个司机,但是你挺喜欢写作,(谁可能建议放弃这种目的)。既然如此你应该要慢慢来,每天写几张页、了解文学,利用好每个机会。可惜常常人们会失望,后不能通过努力达到目的。我觉得老有时候人们不失望希望被做不好的事儿,相反,他们被恐惧堵心蒙蔽,所以我希望每个人开始慢慢改变日常生活。

    建议:你好Adele,我把你的一些语法和用词错误修改了。但是总的来说你的写作在逻辑上还是比较偏向于英式,所以一些句子会读起来奇怪,我举一个例子,比如我给你加了括号的这个句子。这是一个反问句,在英语里这种说法很常见,但是我们通常不这么用,所以我建议可以把这个句子删除(你平时也可以多对比一下中文和英语写作习惯的区别)。我给你很多句子润色了一下,这样读起来更加通顺,但是这还不够,希望你平时多多练习,中文水平更上一层楼:)

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    November 10, 2018
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    Volunteers Needed In order to expand high school students' view, our university is going to hold a summer camp in next summer vacation. The high school students will be involved in various activities. First, visiting our campus, classrooms and laborat­ories led by us, they will know how university life goes pri­marily. Second. some professors are invited to give a lecture to them, through which they will develop some skills. Last but not least, they'll attend a game in the playground, which will improve their cooperation mind. Those who are interested to be a volunteer are wel­comed to join us. Send your resume to our e-mail - [email protected] before May 10,2019. The Students Union
    November 9, 2018
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    介绍我的国家的一个特别的节日

    我想介绍一个俄罗斯的节日。这是叫做谢肉节又称送烤薄饼周。这个节日不是公共假日但俄罗斯人很喜欢这个节。谢肉节非常古老。这个节来自二世纪。每年的时间都不一样。大约二月末和三月初我们开始庆祝谢肉节。我们用这七天的时间来告别冬天。另外每一天都有不同的庆祝方式。舞蹈,歌唱,滑雪,滑冰,拳击,去做客,吃薄煎饼什么的。但现在很少人遵循这个传统,最重要的是星期日。这是庆祝的最后一天。我们这一整周都做很多薄煎饼。谢肉节的时间这是最重要的传统(没看懂这句话的意思)。这种薄饼象征着太阳又圆又金黄。表示春天的来临和白天越来越长。周日是宽恕日。人们互相请求原谅自己的错误。在这一天最好的部分是人们还要烧掉象征冬天的稻草人。寓意将冬天送走。
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    November 9, 2018
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    今天你吃了什么?

    今天你吃了什么?
    今天我吃了鳕子意大利面,三明治和色拉。我吃饱了。

    最近你有什么让你心跳加速的事情?
    最近我上英语课的时候用英语讲话了。我很紧张。
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    November 8, 2018
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    A Letter to Editor Dear editors, As one of the residents of our city, I'm writing the letter to you for the plastic bag issues. While it is restricted to use plastic bags in our country, the phenomenon of plastic bags abuse is still existing. We must solve this problem to make our city a better place. Therefore, I'd like to give 2 advices for you. First, you pubic media could report the phenomenon frequently to raise the govern­ment's attention, so that they could solve the issues effectively under the public pressure. Second, it would be good if you release some advertisements about not using plastic bag on the newspaper to appeal citizens to protect our city. I'd appreciate it if you could take my advices. I believe our environment will be better through our efforts. Yours sincerely Li Ming
    November 8, 2018
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    Look and Write The picture below shows us the situation that a boy don't want to go to school,for he think he can know everything from his mobile phone. As far as I'm concerned,I don't agree with what he said. I think it's a terrible thought.First of all,as we know,mobile phone brings us convenience because of it's intelligent,but it also shows its side effect that we can easily get addicted to it.Secondly,mobile phone is just like an assistant,it can help us search information but can not be our teacher.School is like a small society.It can not only teach us knowledge but also make us know how to get along with others,which mobile phone can not provide to us.Last but not least,school can help us be a mature man in all directions. All in all,it's necessary to tell children that they go to school is not just for knowledge but also for something else.So I hold the belief that mobile phone can not take the place of school.
    November 29, 2015
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    我最喜欢的一些在秋天的事情

    秋天来了,我很喜欢在秋天做的的事情有两件。第一件是看橄榄球(原句句式杂糅)。我们最喜欢的橄榄球队是斯坦佛的,因为我丈夫的博士学位是在那里获得的(根据你提供的英语消息翻译)。(Our favorite team is Stanford's, because my husband received his PhD there.) 橄榄球是美国人最喜欢的运动,每周六有很多大学比赛,每周日有很多职业比赛 (professional/pro games)。

    第二件是Balloon Fiesta. 我们住的城市是新墨西哥州最大的,叫做Albuquerque (阿布奎基)。每个十月初的九天里大家能看到几百个热气球,非常漂亮。有的时候,风会把热气球飘向我们家,我们甚至可以像热气球里面的人问好! (感叹句要有感叹的成分)

    在美国,秋天南瓜收获,我们可以做很多南瓜做的食物,万圣节前夕,每个孩子最喜欢的季节之一。在我们这里,秋天的天气是最舒服的。总的来说,我觉得秋天是我最喜欢的季节。

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    October 5, 2014
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