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Volunteers Needed In order to expand high school students' view, our university is going to hold a summer camp in next summer vacation. The high school students will be involved in various activities. First, visiting our campus, classrooms and laborat­ories led by us, they will know how university life goes pri­marily. Second. some professors are invited to give a lecture to them, through which they will develop some skills. Last but not least, they'll attend a game in the playground, which will improve their cooperation mind. Those who are interested to be a volunteer are wel­comed to join us. Send your resume to our e-mail - [email protected] before May 10,2019. The Students Union

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Volunteers Needed

In order to expand high school students' views, our university is going to hold a summer camp during the next summer vacation.
The high school students will be involved in various activities. First, visiting our campus, classrooms and laboratories led by us, they will learn how university life goes primarily. Second, some professors are invited to give a lecture to them, through which they will develop some skills. Last but not least, they'll attend a game in the playground, which will improve their cooperation mind.
Those who are interested to be a volunteer are welcomed to join us. Send your resume to our e-mail - [email protected] before May 10, 2019.

The Students Union


Nice, only concerns are, a university doesn't have a playground, that would be for elementary or junior school. Also I'm really not sure what you're trying to say towards the end of that sentence, "cooperation mind"? I've simply removed the mind part to make it sound better in the context. 


Hope this is of help somewhat. 


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