We are the same.

It is as difficult as this is for you for me as it is for you. It could have been my life a long time ago. But I chose not differently. If I had were your age, I would study and read as many books as I could, just like you do.

Pas mal!

hHello

hHi everybody , it's been a long time that not entry a notebook since I've written a notebook entry!
bBut i would say that can read in eEnglish and understand what I read. but Though, i I have again a little problem for talk or write some difficulty in speaking and writing. However, I try to write or speak almost one or to day of weeks for at least one or two days each week.

Il faut mettre une majuscule aux mots lorsuqe on commence une phrase. Et les "I" aussi!

The three little pigs

One Once upon a time there were three little pigs. They lived in a sweet (little?) home with their mother. They grew up and one day their mum said to them : “You are tall big now and our house is so short small, that each of you must leave and build each your own home.” Before to they say said goodbye, their mother recommended warned them : “Take Be careful, don’t open the door at to the big bad wolf.”
However, The three pigs chose a different way.  chose differently.

The first pig met a man who had a straw bale on the his shoulders a straw bale. The pig tell told him : “Could you please give me this?” The man accepted it. So the small pig built quickly quickly built his new home, and after that he rested.
The second pig met a an old man who carried wood on the his arm wood. The pig asked him : “I would like to take you your wood, it is is it possible?” “Yes, it is” replied the old man. Then The the pig built his wood house.
The third went at to a mason in town and paid for bricks et and stones and for several days, he built his beautiful house.

Voilà les corrections! Je crois que tu essaies de traduire le français directement en anglais. Je peux presque voir les mots dans ta tête :) If faut s'habituer de penser en anglais sans avoir les mots français à la tête...

New zealand Zealand

Hi, can could you help me to corrige correct m'y my fault mistakes please?

The notion idea i'm I'm going to deal with is the notion idea of spaces ans and exchanges. It can be defined as the movements movement of or circulation in differents different countries of the world . it It includes all types of media, of communication, etc. I'm going interesting about interested in the exchanges of human people in the country of new Zealand , a country populated by whose population is 4.7 millions million and whose who are 74% Europeans, European, and 15% Maoris.

This number represented represents the various cultures presents present in NZ. That way So, I would like to try to and answer the question as to what extent NZ is a melting pot a for various cultures?. We I will focus on the populations who that have succeeded in new Zealand since the British colonization, then I'm going to deal with the immigration and tourism.

Thanks

Hi Doriane, I hope these corrections help you!

Why so formal ?

Why people are are people so formal here ? I mean, when you mean meet someone here, you really have to be very formal do you really have to be so formal? When someone send sends me a message, I always try to be very nice and friendly in order to make the other person comfortable. bBut I noticed amny many people here are very formal and it makes me feel very uncomfortable, as if I were bothering them...

Are you usually very formal with people you talk to on Italki ? Do you feel comfortable speaking with very formal people ?

My favourite hobby

Good evening everybody. Today I want to talk about one of my favourite hobby hobbies. Writing. I love writing. I have a big (huge? large?) imagination. I'm always dreaming and thinking of stories in my head. Usually I try to imagine how a random situation can become an adventure. For example I would be going (or I'd be going) to work when suddenly something magical would happens (or would happen). I'm a huge fan of fantastic fantasy movies and novels and I really enjoy science fiction. I like to think of a world where we don't have to worry about money and work or responsabilities responsibilities. We would just live adventures and life would never be boring. But I know it isn't possible. I have other hobby hobbies of course. Travelling is my biggest passion. Visiting countries and discovering different cultures is so rewarding. One of my goal goals in life is to visit as many countries as possible. I want to meet people from all around the world !

Note: Good work! Sometimes a sentence can be technically correct, but still seem a bit "off" . The only way to get a better "ear" is to read and speak more :)

Hi! I'm a native English speaker living in the US and would like to improve my French. Si ça te va, on peut se parler? Une demi-heure en français et une demi-heure on anglais! T'es d'accord?

I've used a writing prompt.

The garden was overgrown now.

This writing prompt is funny because the topic makes me think about my garden.I live in a small town (around 7000 inhabitants) and I have a house with a very big and long backyard. The problem is that the yard is sloped and it's like within the garden there are several stages steps to create retain the flatness. When I moved in into the house 5 years ago, I saw the overgrown and lush garden. I decided to cut everyting everything off. I was the baddest worst idea of my life because it took me 3 days to do it. So I've decided to never pull the bad weeds out in this wild garden and I put a barrier that impedes people to pass through prevents people from passing through.

 

I've tried to make as few corrections as possible, and leave the text grammatically correct. Though there can be some phrases that sound a little strange, you can still say them!