My favourite hobby
Good evening everybody. Today I want to talk about one of my favourite hobby. Writing. I love writing. I have a big imagination. I'm always dreaming and thinking of stories in my head. Usually I try to imagine how a random situation can become an adventure. For example I would go to work when suddenly something magical would happens. I'm a huge fan of fantastic movies and novels and I really enjoy science fiction. I like to think of a world where we don't have to worry about money and work or responsabilities. We would just live adventures and life would never be boring. But I know it isn't possible. I have other hobby of course. Travelling is my biggest passion. Visiting countries and discovering different cultures is so rewarding. One of my goal in life is to visit as many countries as possible. I want to meet people from all around the world !
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My favourite hobby
Good evening everybody. Today I want to talk about one of my favourite hobby hobbies. Writing. I love writing. I have a big (huge? large?) imagination. I'm always dreaming and thinking of stories in my head. Usually I try to imagine how a random situation can become an adventure. For example I would be going (or I'd be going) to work when suddenly something magical would happens (or would happen). I'm a huge fan of fantastic fantasy movies and novels and I really enjoy science fiction. I like to think of a world where we don't have to worry about money and work or responsabilities responsibilities. We would just live adventures and life would never be boring. But I know it isn't possible. I have other hobby hobbies of course. Travelling is my biggest passion. Visiting countries and discovering different cultures is so rewarding. One of my goal goals in life is to visit as many countries as possible. I want to meet people from all around the world !Note: Good work! Sometimes a sentence can be technically correct, but still seem a bit "off" . The only way to get a better "ear" is to read and speak more :)
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My favourite hobby
Good evening, everybody. Today, I want to talk about one of my favourite hobbies-- Writing. I love writing. I have a great imagination. I'm always dreaming and thinking of stories in my mind. Usually I try to imagine how a random situation can become an adventure. For example, I would go to work when suddenly, something magical would happen. I'm a huge fan of fantasy movies and novels and I really enjoy science fiction. I like to think of a world where we don't have to worry about money and work or responsibilities. We would just go on adventures and life would never be boring. However, I know it isn't possible. I have other hobby of course. Travelling is my greatest passion. Visiting countries and discovering different cultures is so rewarding. One of my goals in life is to visit as many countries as possible. I want to meet people from all around the world!Hi Marie,
A great piece of writing! Keep writing.
Cheers, Lance
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My favourite hobby
Good evening everybody. Today I want to talk about one of my favorite hobbies. Writing. I love writing. I have a big imagination. I'm always dreaming and thinking of stories in my head. Usually I try to imagine how a random situation could become an adventure. For example I would go to work when suddenly something magical would happen. I'm a huge fan of fantastic movies and novels and I really enjoy science fiction. I like to think of a world where we don't have to worry about money, work, or responsabilities. We would just live adventures and life would never be boring. But I know it isn't possible. I have other hobbies of course. Travelling is my biggest passion. Visiting countries and discovering different cultures is so rewarding. One of my goals in life is to visit as many countries as possible. I want to meet people from all around the world !I love to write and to travel as well! Speaking of writing, this was very well written!
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That's great ! usually write short stories
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this great hobby i love writing too but are you write novel or just notice
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