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Problem and Solution of Rapid Industrialization
Most of developing countries in the world suffer from the process of Rapid Industrialization. One of these developing countries is South Korea. Due to the Rapid Industrialization policies called the Miracle of Han River, the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) of the South Korea rose to the 13th highest position in the world. However, in South Korea there is a problem that the Rapid Industrialization policies cause (Damian Carrington, The Guardian). Many forests have been being destroyed and most of the clean seas and lakes have been being polluted. These cases are continual, not only these cases but there are also many others that destroy the environment. The main cause of those problems is the use of excessive fossil fuels. While the Korean government doesn't take into account environmental issues, it pursues quantitative growth; as a result, the government uses overdue fossil fuels. Thus, Korean environmental issues are seriously bad. Using renewable resources instead of fossil fuels is the best way to solve this problem because the resources reduce a lot of carbon dioxide and other global warming emissions. They improve public health, environmental quality and the resources also bring economic benefits to many regional areas.
0 votedJune 7, 20151Solution of Rapid Industrialization
First, renewable resources reduce a lot of carbon dioxide and other global warming emissions. Global warming emissions trap heat, steadily drive up the planet’s temperature, and create significant and harmful impacts on Korean temperature and heat. They are released by the use of fossil fuels such as coal, petroleum. Electricity production accounts for more than one-third of Korean global warming emissions, with the majority generated by coal-fired power plants, which produce approximately 25 percent of total Korean global warming emissions; however, natural gas-fired power plants produce 6 percent of total emissions [1]. According to data aggregated by the International Panel on Climate Change, warming emissions associated with renewable energy are minimal [2]. Compared with natural gas, which emits between 0.6 and 2 pounds of carbon dioxide equivalent per kilowatt-hour (CO2E/kWh), and coal, which emits between 1.4 and 3.6 pounds of CO2E/kWh [3]. Nevertheless, there is a problem with renewable resources. One disadvantage with renewable energy is that it is difficult to generate the quantities of electricity that are as large as those produced by traditional fossil fuel generators. However, many technicians and scientists in Korea are developing more sophisticated and efficient renewable resources to get rid of this problem. In conclusion, renewable resources help to curtail the overuse of carbon and other global warming emissions, and they are excellent resources to cancel out the problem of supply quantities
0 votedJune 7, 20151Interview
Andres lopez interview
The present is creativity’s magical moment. So, just like a pilot would say “it doesn’t matter the number of hours flown, the most important one is the next one. To ensure the flow of creativity, one must recognize another person. If one cannot duplicate another’s communication, one is doomed to fail.
So, then we begin by knowing the other person. Know the lady who does laundry, the guy at the store, or the guy at the bus stop. We must recognize the other person. Socrates said ‘We must know ourselves’ but that’s not entirely true. To know ourselves begins at the point when we get to know the other person. If we don’t recognize others it would be pointless to know ourselves.
The ability and effectiveness to communicate lies in the legitimacy and ethicality of our actions. If we do honest work and meaningful work, the ability and effectiveness will find its way through. It is about purpose. If the your purpose is fame, you won’t get anywhere far. You must have a humanistic approach because it is the essence and protection of fragility.
Recognizing our humanity is the highest validation, it is universal in our history and our path to creativity. If your purpose is to get into a club for free – getting recognized in the line and to hear “hey! You can come in” that goes nowhere. And so, it must be a meaningful purpose.
Creativity is the clash of all the things we find in the universe and the fitting them together of pieces in a sort of ‘crazy’ way – something that is found in artistic expression – in that the question is posed, "how crazy can you make those things we find fit together?"
I think the one responsible for most of the modern art is Homer, who wrote The Odyssey. From there, going back to the circus schools in India 2,000 or 5,000 years ago there were doing circus acts and acrobats in ancient China. We can trace our creativity further back to cave paintings – when somebody decided to paint their house walls. That is a place we must always look back to for creativity.
My best quality would be a disregard for other’s opinions – that you’re constantly protected from other people and things and maintaining a false image. You have to stop being interested in other people’s lives and material things and instead take interest in people as a whole. There’s a difference between the two. You have to drop your pride and ego and take interest instead of being interested. Marvel at the new things that come with each new day. Stop being self-interested and be a collector of marvels.0 votedJune 7, 20150How to improve the whole campus
I'm so happy to learn/know that our university will improve the whole campus. Some great suggestions have occurred to me. They are as follows:
Firstly, I think we ought to have an English corner on campus. As we all know, every student has to pass the English test band 4 . What's more, some students who are good at English can pass the English test band 6. Meanwhile, most people are afraid of the listening comprehension section. Therefore, we need to practice speaking more at the english corner so that we can make great progress in it. Secondly, campus activities should be held often. We take part in them actively, which is benefits our minds and bodies and psycology health. Also, we can make many friends. Last but not least, a comfortable campus environment can give us good moods. We should call for every student to protect our campus environment.
I believe that our campus will be much better after this improvement. Let us work hard for it.0 votedJune 7, 20151It's sunny day!
Today's Moscow is sunny! It's perfect! Unfortunately, summer is very shot in my country. Every sunny day I go out. I'm walking now in the park. I'm sitting on the grass and looking at the lake. There are birds singing. There are a lot of people walking and riding a bikes. I am also riding a bike. I'm going!
0 votedJune 7, 20152The girl
I should have gone to the party but I still cant sleep until now in spite of my tiresome tiredness. I asked the company about when will the result would come up; they said a week. That troubles me. I post my feelings about the interview, and I hope I can find that girl again. I wish to see her again, even though she is poor breasted as most Asian girls. A JP psychoanalyst said it is normal for men, or that it is abnormal. It is sad but true, the men will be pitiful in mind forever, but it is his choice to be in love however.
And The job position is interesting. but I worry about the company, but my job can change it.s
It seems that people in on the mainland give it negative evaluation.
Then Anyway, I don't see anything interesting here today. Hmm I think maybe that is it. I still can go to see a place through of a friend where there is are no strange feelings.--------------
Good Work! Don't feel too melancholic - I also have my anxieties. If we think too much, sometimes it can make bigger problems... :)
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0 votedMay 25, 20150150408 Hayley Ielts_
If they can't find anyone to help
they ask me
There is a lot of snow on in this part of country
There is a lot of snow in this part of the country
The weather in Russia is quite varied
the southern part of the country has a subtropical climate, which I like!
the northern part is however much colder, and there is a lot of snow in this part of the country
The weather doesn't influence my mood as I have lived in a different city with a different climate and it had no influence on my mood, productivity or [ANY ASPECT] of my life. I've also lived in St Petersburg which, I think, has an awful climate which is snowy, cold etc [ALL THE TIME] but my mood and productivity there was also good! Maybe in the future I will feel a change in climate will that influences my mood but at the moment, I don't
I have a favourite season, this is Autumn ...
My favourite season is ...
because it's not very hot and there is a lot of work in that season in our business. Our clients ask for a program implementation in autumn and there are a lot of orders in that season. It's very interesting, I like my job and I like autumn because of that reason
Describe an exciting experience in your life.
You should say:
• when the experience took place
• where the experience took place
• what happened exactly
and explain why the experience was so exciting.
I have had a lot of exciting experiences in my life but I remember one special experience in K. It was maybe 5/6 years ago. My colLeagues , my wife and I WENT ON a trip to an island in K. it was a very beautiful and very exciting place and I had never seen a place like that before. We hirED a yacht and had went fishing.
There was a wooden building | There WERE a lot of wooden buildingS in around it and it was great building without any nails. We had a good rest and we forgot about our any problemS and our mother, my wife's mother helped us. she stayed with our children and we can do it did everything together with my wife. It was great.
We assembled the tent, made a fire, and made some wooden tables and chairs because we stayed for a long period of time. We went fishing, saw some swans, and played games outside. We had a lot of free time and we can could spend it as we wanted.0 votedMay 5, 20151scientific paper
I'd need to improve the conclusion of my scientific paper...(some parts are omitted)
In order to valorise the bromure employment as a sub-product of the process, an innovative plant has was tested on steam production by means of bromure combustion.
The measurements of pressures, temperatures and flow rates are provided by XXX company, which were installed by the pilot plant ZZZZ in order to calculate its performance. The energy efficiencies obtained for the entire system are xx % and xxx %.
Those values are comparable than to the ones found in analogue studies for Industrial plants because the examined system is a pilot plant and it doesn’t produce energy (from an economical point of view). as well as In addition, the boiler worked under low-load operating conditions.
Technical adoptions modifications employed in Industrial plants (xxxxxx) for energy production can easily improve such efficiencies. For instance, the employment of better thermal insulation materials or of water preheating systems from exhaust gases enhance the energy efficiency. xxxxx
The results of the research? highlight the strengths of bromure employment within the mentioned technology.
Differently from conventional plants, the xxxxx plant can employ fuels as the bromure with has a low calorific value (probably also with a much lower value than had been assumed), with significant values of efficiencies (as shown in the present paper).
Additionally, it can recover the latent heat from the water vapour of the exhaust gases thanks to the absence of nitrogen in the gas; it can adapt technologies to capture the oxygen present in the bromure with a reduction in problems related to the durability of materials. It can also capture the ammonia produced by means of only physical systems of compression and condensation without the employment of absorption and stripping solvents.----
Thanks for the opportunity of correcting this scientific paper. I saw nobody had attempted to do it, so I thought I would give it a shot as a proofreader. Well Done and Good Luck
0 votedApril 14, 20152An application for work. fix it plz :)
My name is Louis. I am from South Korea.
I graduated from university with a degree in sculpture and have had 6 years experience in a sculpting job.
I am currently staying in Australia now for sand sculpting work where I recently received 2nd prize in the Australian championship.
I hope to work with your company. If your company invited me, i would really appreciate the opportunity and i would do my best to prove my sand sculpting abilities.
I apply for it and Alongside this application, I attach some examples of my previous work.-------
Well Done. A good, simple application. I made a number of corrections to make the letter 'formal' in the language of application. Also, I made a few corrections to your word order.
Good Luck!
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