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Problem and Solution of Rapid Industrialization Most of developing countries in the world suffer from the process of Rapid Industrialization. One of the developing countries is South Korea. Due to the Rapid Industrialization policies called the Miracle of Han River, The Gross Domestic Product (GDP) of the South Korea rose to the 13th highest in the world. However, in South Korea there is a problem the Rapid Industrialization policies cause (Damian Carrington, TheGuardian). Many forests have been being destroyed and most of clean seas and lakes have been being polluted. Not only these cases but also many cases that destroy environment have happened continually. Main cause of those problems is to use excessive fossil fuels. While the Korean government didn’t take into account environmental issues, The Korean government was pursuing quantitative growth, so the government used overdue fossil fuels. As a result, the Korean environmental issues are seriously bad. Using renewable resources instead of fossil fuels is the best way to solve this problem because the resources reduce a lot of carbon dioxide and other global warming emissions, improve public health and environmental quality and the resources bring economic benefits to many regional areas.

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Problem and Solution of Rapid Industrialization

Most of developing countries in the world suffer from the process of Rapid Industrialization. One of these developing countries is South Korea. Due to the Rapid Industrialization policies called the Miracle of Han River, the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) of the South Korea rose to the 13th highest position in the world. However, in South Korea there is a problem that the Rapid Industrialization policies cause (Damian Carrington, The Guardian). Many forests have been being destroyed and most of the clean seas and lakes have been being polluted. These cases are continual, not only these cases but there are also many others that destroy the environment. The main cause of those problems is the use of excessive fossil fuels. While the Korean government doesn't take into account environmental issues, it pursues quantitative growth; as a result, the government uses overdue fossil fuels. Thus, Korean environmental issues are seriously bad. Using renewable resources instead of fossil fuels is the best way to solve this problem because the resources reduce a lot of carbon dioxide and other global warming emissions. They improve public health, environmental quality and the resources also bring economic benefits to many regional areas.

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