My travel across Canada! part 1

I left Quebec by car a little bit more than a month ago Quebec city by car to cross Canada. My main objectives was were to go in to the rockies, see Vancouver and go surfing at Tofino!

My first real stop was Banff. I will always remember the first time I saw the mountains... It's They're so beautiful, I couldn't believe it. They were so big and I drove between them for a hour before I arrived in the village of Banff. I spent their few days there. I went to Lake Louise and did some hiking trail and other attraction activities . I went to Jasper afterwards and the national park of Jasper is even more impressive than the Banff national park. The mountains are bigger and you feel really small behind them. I saw black bears, grizzly, mountain goat and an elk. I did the skywalk, it's a big platform suspended over the valley and the floor is glasses glass/made of glass, so you can see through! It was a fabulous experience. I love the rockies and I encourage you to come see those fabulous mountains!

Technical document feedback

This entry might be a little technical, but I need some feedback on the English of this article. I thought my writing was OK until a recently received some critique. Thanks advanced in advance for the help ! And please give me a *cruel* honest feedback.

Power management is crucial to wireless sensor networks due to battery limited capacity. While there are many models for the performance of generic wireless sensor networks in the literature [I am not sure what this phrase is supposed to mean], a few realistic models exist that are based on specific existing wireless sensor nodes within realistic operating conditions in which it is important to accurately model radio propagation.[This sentence is too long and therefore, too weak.] For example, waves in a wireless sensor network operating in the 2.4GHz ISM band behaves behave [subject is waves] differently from a network operating in the 60GHz mm-wave band which [what is which referring to: the waves or the network. Subject needs to be clearer]suffers much more attenuation. Waves propagate in different manners; attenuation is more apparent at higher frequencies, and for that reason, power levels are different. While it may seem that lower frequencies are better in terms of power consumption, higher frequencies allow for higher data rates which in turn reduces reduce the transmission and reception times and that leads to low power consumption.Apparently there is a trade-off here. To the best of my knowledge, there are no models for wireless sensor networks operating at mm-wave frequencies. It would be interesting to tackle this area.

Eat typic Eating type in Colombia

The paisa is also known as "tray mountaineering" or 'typical Antioquia kitchen', corresponding to Antioquia, Viejo Caldas or the Coffee Belt (Caldas, Quindio and Risaralda), in the northern part of Valle del Cauca and northern Tolima Colombia.

This dish is served in a wide dishes, oval and several pieces (tray type). [Better: This dish is served on several oval plates]. In its traditional classical presentation, it is traditionally composed of fourteen ingredients unchanged that are always the same: twelve of them arranged in the said trays and dishes, and two more as an accompaniment; are these: The ingredients are these:

White rice, ground beef, pork, fried egg, Patacón, Chorizo, lemon Antioquia, Antioquia Arepa, HogaoCon tomato and onion, Beans, Cargamanto, sliced red tomato, avocado, ripe banana chops and serve accompanied by porridge with milk, ground Panela or "sweet male" and Refajo.

[Pay more attention to punctuations. Capitalizations in the ingredient list is not necessary]

Speaking practice

I´m have decided to get fluency on in this language! So this summer is gonna be my summer.. Or I hope so!