My travel across Canada! part 1

I left Quebec by car a little bit more than a month ago Quebec city by car to cross Canada. My main objectives was were to go in to the rockies, see Vancouver and go surfing at Tofino!

My first real stop was Banff. I will always remember the first time I saw the mountains... It's They're so beautiful, I couldn't believe it. They were so big and I drove between them for a hour before I arrived in the village of Banff. I spent their few days there. I went to Lake Louise and did some hiking trail and other attraction activities . I went to Jasper afterwards and the national park of Jasper is even more impressive than the Banff national park. The mountains are bigger and you feel really small behind them. I saw black bears, grizzly, mountain goat and an elk. I did the skywalk, it's a big platform suspended over the valley and the floor is glasses glass/made of glass, so you can see through! It was a fabulous experience. I love the rockies and I encourage you to come see those fabulous mountains!

Ahh c'est bon! Sonne marvelleux. J'aime Banff et Lake Louise, c'est tres belle. J'aime les montagnes. A couple small edits to give suggestions on more Native English sounding ways to phrase things!

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My travel across Canada! part 1

I left a little bit more than a month ago Quebec city by car to cross Canada.

["I left Quebec City a little ove ra month ago to cross Canada by car"]

My main objectives was to go in the rockies, see Vancouver and go surfing at Tofino!

[Here, rather than saying "my main objectives" we'd probably say "My plan"... alors.. "My plan was to go to the rockies, see Vancouver and go surfing in Tofino"]

My first real stop was Banff. I will always remember the first time I saw the mountains... It's so beautiful, I couldn't believe it. They were so big and I drove between them for a hour before I arrived in the village of Banff. I spent their few days ["I spent a few days there"]. I went to Lake Louise and did some hiking trail and visited other attractions. I went to Jasper after and the national park of Jasper is even more impressive than the Banff national park. The mountains are bigger and you feel really small behind them. I saw black bears, a grizzly, a mountain goat and an elk. I did the skywalk, its a big platform suspended over the valley and the floor is glasses, so you can see through! It was a fabulous experience. I love the rockies and I encourage you to come see those fabulous mountains!