My day))

Today was a difficuld difficult day, since I worked all day. Of course, I like my job, but sometimes my job is heavy  tiring.
In the This morning I bought an English book. I heard that this book is easy and interesting. My goal is to read it, I suppose tommorow tomorrow I will begin to reat read this book. And I am going to write about this story, maybe you will be interested ))) If you like romantic books, I'm sure that you will like this book will like you! I know that it is four hundred pages and I can ask that this is the first English book which I have decided to read ))) Good luck to me))
Goodbye

<em>I wasn't sure what you meant by "heavy" so I changed it to "tiring," which is a more common English expression. Also, I fixed up some spelling errors. You really like to use commas when you should be using periods, so I fixed that up as well. 

</em><em>I'm curious what the title of the book is. Is it something I've read?? In any case, good luck, and happy learning :)</em>

Au pair (<em>two words</em>) life

I am working like as an au pair in the UK. I don't like this country, but I think that it living here (<em>"it" is a vague word</em>) is the best and quickest way to improve my English faster. <em>(taking out "faster" and using "best and quickest" instead is NOT an essential correction, but it helps the sentence flow better, and sound more natural to a native speaker)</em>
I work with three children, who have are one, two and three years old. I like the job and the family. They are so nice, but I miss my family, my boyfriend and also the good weather of Malaga.

<em>Thank you for sharing, and I hope you become better acclimated as time goes by. Good luck! :)</em>

The weather today

It seems incredible, but it's true,: (<em>use a colon here</em>) it rains has rained for three days. I don't remember a time with worse weather worst.

The worst problem Worst of all, are the streets that become rivers. (<em>Removed "are" because it was in teh wrong tense, changed "The worst problem" into an introductory clause of "Worst of all"</em>)

We are used to the sun and to have having nice sunny days.

Unfortunately, it's winter, and usually the weather is bad like these days.

I hope that spring will come soon, bringing better climatic conditions then i'm going to so I can ride my bike again. (<em>I added "so I can" in order that the end of the sentence relates to the first part via cause-and-effect: you hope that spring comes soon - the cause, so that you can ride bike again - the</em> effect)

<em>I hope all my corrections make sense. </em>

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<em>Also, I hope the weather gets better soon, because personally, I hate the winter (I live in the state of Indiana, and it can get down to -20 degrees celsius in the wintertime ... no fun!)</em>

Something about me

I am an architecture student of at the uUniversity of Valencia.

To improve acquire this degree, the students need to have the B2 level in English.

My problem is that since high school I had have not never more learned studied English since high school, and now I have problems to with speaking and writing. (B<em>esides changing some of the words used, </em><em>I have switched some of the clauses in this sentence so that they flow more</em> naturally.)<em></em>

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Therefore I am here in italki, (<em>no comma</em>) to learn English, and for to find people helps who can help me. 

Moreover, I can help to other people that they who want to learn Spanish.

I think that this page can help we us to improve in other languages, and that (<em>Parallelism between first half of sentence and second: </em><em>"I think THAT ..., and THAT"</em>) it cans help us to get achieve our aims.

Thanks in advance!

<em>Good luck with your studies! :)</em>

Strong temptation.

Yesterday I met with my friend. We hadn't seen each other for a long time, so we were very happy to meet at last. While we enjoyed spending time discussing our news and gossiping about men, her phone rang, and I discovered saw that the case for her phone was in the form of was made to look like chocolate. It looked so natural that I waited to see her palm soiled with melted chocolate at the next moment. I even felt that sweet taste in my mouth.
After that I ate the whole chocolate bar, and of course felt guilty. No! Chocolate is too strong temptation for me, I can't resist.

<em>Very few errors. You're a good writer :) I corrected some comma errors, but the only other corrections are mostly superficial, to help the sentences sound more natural - more like a native English speaker. 

</em><em>Also, I too love chocolate far more than I should, but I never feel guilty after eating it. There is NOTHING wrong with eating chocolate (I tell myself). </em>

Kind waitress

I went to the Apple bee's Applebee's (<em>one word</em>), last week, to have lunch with my husband last week. 

The waitress asked me that where I am from, and I answered, with a smile, that I am from Korea. with smile. (<em>"with a smile" is modifying "I answered" rather than "I am from Korea"</em>)

She told me she is good at Japanese and also wants to study Korean.

Actually I tought thought it just made us pleased.

After I was done with my lunch, I asked her to bring our check.

She handed me the check with some greetings in Korean like thak "thank you" and "bye." (<em>use quotation marks around words when talking about the words themselves</em>)

Even her pronunciation was very clear, though she was a beginer beginner.

However, the most amazing thing was between the reeipt receipt. She wrote had written us a letter in Korean.

How touching! This was my first time to receive receiving a letter from American.

I was so surprised, and thanked her to for expressing her interest about in Korean language.

It may be unfogettable memory to me. It is something I will never forget.

The Neurolinguistic Description of Dyslexia

The General Overview of Dyslexia
What is dyslexia?
Dyslexia is a neurological situation of language disorders. It refers to the disability of learning a learning disability. the Greek prefix dys means "difficult" or "hard," (<em>quotation marks are used around words when they are being refered to as words</em>) "lexia" refers to "words." And then, the term "specific reading and writing difficulties" is used to refer to the dyslexia denotation. Additionally, all children with dyslexia may encounter difficulties in other language skills such us spelling, writing, and speaking. It can have also cause phonological difficulties. Thus, dDyslexia is the most common cause of reading, writing, and spelling difficulties. (<em>"thus" cannot be used in this sentence, since it has not yet be established, in this essay, how common dyslexia is</em>)
Dyslexia is often related to difficulties in literacy acquisition. Furthermore, it can have an impact on cognitive process such as memory, coordination,and time management.
" Dyslexia is recognizable as a measurable discrepancy between cognitive ability and literacy level."
(NWP Report, Dyslexia in Higher Education,1999)
EventuallyFinally, dyslexia is not necessarily such as a bad thing. Some of the cleverest people in the world have been dyslexic such us Henry Winkler, Leonardo Da Vinci, and Albert Einstein. (<em>period, rather than semi-colon</em>)

I HOPE YOU ENJOY READING IT
Sincerely;
SMILE EVERY DAY 

I like your username :)

Vitaly Bianki

Vitaly Bianki was a popular children’s writer. He was born 30.01.1894 in St. Petersburg, Russian Empire. His favorite genres are were (<em>maintain past tense</em>) natural history and children's literature. Often he wrote stories about forester, their life and adventure forest-dwellers; their lives and adventures (<em>or</em> the lives and adventures of forest-dwellers ... <em>this second version feels more conversational</em>). The His most famous work of his is "Forest Newspaper for Every Year". (<em>punctuation stays inside parenthesis</em>), which It is an encyclopedia of forest life and forest inhabitants (<em>it's not necessarily wrong to have this second sentence stand on it's own, but it flows better when it completes the thought started in the preceding sentence, rather than starting a new thought</em>). The heritage ouvre of this writer consists of over 300 short stories, fairy tales, stories, and articles, which make up 120 books.
Vitali Bianki died in Leningrad 10 June 1959. (<em>this final date MUST be in the same form as his birthday, so either have his birth date be 30 January 1894, or have his death date be 10.06.1959</em>) 

Thank you for sharing this! I had never heard of this author, and I might just have to check him out :)