Kind waitress

I went to the Apple bee's to have lunch with my husband last week.

The waitress asked me that where I am from and I answered that I am from Korea with smile.

She told me she is good at Japanese and also wants to study Korean.

Actually I tought it just made us pleased. (I'm not sure what you mean here? thought? Perhaps "I thought was just saying it to be nice")

After I was done with my lunch, I asked her to bring our check.

She handed me the check with some greetings in Korean like thak thank you and bye.

Even her pronunciation was very clear though she was a beginer beginner. (we'd probably say "just a beginner".)

However, the most amazing thing was between the reeipt receipt, she wrote us a letter in Korean.

How touching! This was my first time to receive the first time I ever received a letter from an American.

I was so surprised and thanked her to for expressing her interest about Korean language.

It may be an unfogettable unforgettable memory to for me.

Well done on a nice notebook entry, a few typing/spelling errors but mostly great :)

Kind waitress

I went to the Apple bee's Applebee's (one word), last week, to have lunch with my husband last week. 

The waitress asked me that where I am from, and I answered, with a smile, that I am from Korea. with smile. ("with a smile" is modifying "I answered" rather than "I am from Korea")

She told me she is good at Japanese and also wants to study Korean.

Actually I tought thought it just made us pleased.

After I was done with my lunch, I asked her to bring our check.

She handed me the check with some greetings in Korean like thak "thank you" and "bye." (use quotation marks around words when talking about the words themselves)

Even her pronunciation was very clear, though she was a beginer beginner.

However, the most amazing thing was between the reeipt receipt. She wrote had written us a letter in Korean.

How touching! This was my first time to receive receiving a letter from American.

I was so surprised, and thanked her to for expressing her interest about in Korean language.

It may be unfogettable memory to me. It is something I will never forget.