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You're doing great with Vietnamese! Keep up the good work!

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Brian.

Childrens dream

When I been was once a child, a lot of people asked me "Whom do you want to be?". I answered to them that "I want to be a wife of superman superman's wife and we save the world together with him." My dream, however, is has/did not come true.

What dream do u did you have when you been were a child?

**OR**

What dream do u did you have when you been as a child?

To Be Not Like Others - To Be Different From Others (please correct it)

I began to write this entry approximately 10 times, but I always wasn't satisfied with each try by my writings. I have realized that it is more easier for me to describe stories like "I came, I saw, I conquered " or "I understood, I gave up, I cried" than to discourse about (an) abstract concept(s) ("an" или "s", выбирайте 1). However, I'll try to finish my story; moreover I have a cool picture as a proof that I never lie.
I am sure that everybody saw a picture where was that portrayed a subtle flower growing through rough stones or an asphalt road. The flower in this case is like a symbol of lust for life.
I went for a walk with my son. We were walking in the centre of the town. I rolled a baby buggy on along the pavement along which grow with bushes. The bushes were cut quite smoothly; their shapes were rectangular. I don't know the kind types of the bushes because I have poor knowledge in the within botany, especially when it concerns the classification of the bushes. Anyway, I know at least one kind of a bush which is called a wild rose (Можно сказать: "I know at least one kind of bush..." или проще "I know a kind of bush..."). Exactly There was exactly/precisely (еще раз, выбирайте 1) a branch of a bold wild rose which broke through unknown to me a rectangular bushes unknown to me. It impressed me so much. I even asked my husband to take a picture of it. I see saw another symbol in this picture. The long, carefully trimmed bushes are the average people who obey the laws of society and the laws of the government. My wild rose is like a rebel; one it is against the crowd, against and the current. It was able not only to survive, but also to bloom and to blossom. It is not grey mass; it is the individuality. Its law is to be outlawed.
I was happy that my husband supported my crazy idea, and so, we returned to this place in order to do a photo session in the middle of the night. Nothing wrong with that how our son looks in the picture as he is going to deprive us of parental rights. Later, he will understand that it's great to be not like different from others.

Please correct these sentences

1. It is not fair how you divide a blanket; you pull it all for yourself.
2. Bees, wasps, ants, caterpillars and crickets are insects.
3. Tom is a capable person, I think he would will become a real polymath in the future. (Вместо ",", можете пользоваться "." или ";")
4. The strange smell has permeated in the room through a keyhole.
5. Ann went to a prison because of the distribution of drugs. (На английском языке, обычно не используем "," с "because", никак русский "я не курю, потому что..." - "I don't smoke because...")
6. Infancy is a carefree and innocent period of a life.
7. Careless of treatment with electricity can be a threat of disaster.
8. Tom always misguides everybody because of his ignorance. (Повтерите как 5)
9. The fundamental aim of this book is a description of life of about disabled people.
10. Ann is very capable, she can roll with any trials. (Повтерите как 3)

Хороший английский у вас! Всего хорошего!

こんにちわ

こんにちわ。 mình muốn làm quen với các bạn đến từ Nhật Bản!

I want to speak english with every body fluently, but I can't. What can I do so that my level becomes better?

my job is very tedious I have a tedious job. I want to look for a job mỏe than that is much more interesting along with high income high. i want to I would like to travel many places all over the world. in the international This is a my dream and I want to it come true to happen. I want to connect along with friends everywhere to share about working, leảning studies, life, etc....

You need to practice more.

What's "I-message" ?

I-message is a method to tell my emotions as well as the matter-of-facts along with facial emotions and body language. I-Message conveys a message of concern and caring. For example, saying “I feel scared that you might hurt yourself when you play with scissors.” is better than saying “Bad girl! Don’t play with scissors!” Most of the time, I start a sentence using “I feel” in order to express my own emotions simply, then explain what was happened. This technique applies to situations in which children need to be aware of others' feelings, reactions, and what is going to happen later, events by what their actions or behaviors.

Sentences in English

Sentences for learning English words. Please correct my mistakes.
2) My son is very moody unless I like him more than anyone else in my life. (the word is unless)

*My son is very moody unless I tell him that he is worth more than anyone else in the world.
3) My friend Jorge is a talented painter, who is painting in interesting way, he racked up a lot of followers. (the word is rack up)

*My friend Jorge is a talented painter who paints in an interesting way. He racked up many followers.
4) The book that I'm reading now is fanfiction. It means this book was based on the popular story. (the word is fanfiction)

*The book that I'm reading at this current time is a fan fiction meaning that it was based on a popular story.
5) I think the love story of Scarlett O'Hara and Rhett Butler captivated a lot of hearts. (the word is captivate)

6) Maybe one day people will be able to travel out the globe and visit another planets. (the word is globe)

*It is a possibility that one day people will be able to travel outside of planet Earth and visit other planets.
7) My american friend is a teacher. When he didn't have a job he recieved grants from the government. (the word is grant)

*My American friend is a (subject - English, History, etc...) teacher. He received grants from the government when he didn't have a job.
8) I took a loan from the bank when I wanted to buy a car, now I think it was a stupid idea. (the word is grant)

*I requested a loan from the bank when I wanted to buy a car, but now I think it was a stupid idea.
9) I'm considering the ability of studying abroad, but I don't think my family's income is enough for it. (the word is consider)

*I'm considering the ability of studying abroad, but I don't think my family's income is enough to support the consideration.
10) I set my alarm on 7 am, but I didn't wake up because I was exhausted. (the word is set)

*I set my clock alarm to 7AM, but I didn't wake up because/since I was exhausted.