Please correct these sentences

1. It is not fair how you divide a blanket; you pull it all for yourself.
2. Bees, wasps, ants, caterpillars and crickets are insects.
3. Tom is a capable person, I think he would will become a real polymath in the future. (Вместо ",", можете пользоваться "." или ";")
4. The strange smell has permeated in the room through a keyhole.
5. Ann went to a prison because of the distribution of drugs. (На английском языке, обычно не используем "," с "because", никак русский "я не курю, потому что..." - "I don't smoke because...")
6. Infancy is a carefree and innocent period of a life.
7. Careless of treatment with electricity can be a threat of disaster.
8. Tom always misguides everybody because of his ignorance. (Повтерите как 5)
9. The fundamental aim of this book is a description of life of about disabled people.
10. Ann is very capable, she can roll with any trials. (Повтерите как 3)

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Please correct these sentences

1. It is not fair how you divide a blanket, you pull it all for yourself.

It was not fair how you shared the blanket:  you pull it all to/for yourself

2. Bees, wasps, ants, caterpillars and crickets are insects  ---- But, caterpillars are still larvae of butterflies . There are not insects , which have 6 legs.

3. Tom is a capable person, and I think he would be a (real/indisputable) polymath in the future.

How not to be a real polymath? Either you are or not ! Indisputable is that no one can deny this fact that he is . Unless, there is an arguement that he is not , then you can say he is a real polymath, but not one is arguing with you when you said that)

4. The strange smell has permeated into the room through a keyhole.

5. Ann went to a prison, because of the distribution of drags.

Ann was sent to a prison because of her distribution of drugs.

Ann went to prison to visit her friend.

6. Infancy is carefree and innocent period of a life.

Infancy is the carefree and innocent period of one's life.

7. Careless of treatment with electricity can be a threat of disaster.

Careless use of electricty can be disastrous./Careless treatment in the use of electricity....

Careless disregard of the danger of electricity can be a threat to safety.

To treat the danger of electricty lightly can have disastrous consequences.

8. Tom always misguides everyone/everybody because of his ignorance.

9. The fundamental aim of this book is description of life of disabled people.

The fundamental theme of this book is the description of the lives of disabled people.

The fundamental aim/message of this book is  to describe their lives and have the readers to understand their plights.

10. Ann is very capable, she can roll with any trials.

Ann is very capable , so she can overcome/handle any trials in her life/she can live with any trials ..