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Hi everyone!
Today, I write (am writing) my first "article", so sorry if I do make lots of mistakes. When I woke up this morning, I opened my eyes and I looked at through my (out of the) window... Waouh (And I thought "Wow!">, all (everything) was white: the trees, my <the> garden, ... Perhaps I'm strange but I really love the winter and the snow!
Suddenly [Not technically wrong, but sounds a bit weird], I thought I was (felt) lucky because I'm sure that some people in some countries don't know the snow or do never so it (have never seen snow in their lives).
So I decided to show you those (these) wonderful landscapes!
Thanks' for people who will correct me, goodbye <Thanks in advance for any corrections.><Bye! / See you later! >
Bé---------------------
Very well done! :) If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
0 votedDecember 29, 20141Wrong Correct
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About preschool education on [_] abroad
I have great interest about am very interested in preschool education because babyhood (this is not really a word. I would probably replace with “the first few years of someone's life) is (this would be “are”, if the previous correction is implemented) important for all person everyone I think. (I would prefer to put “I think” after “because”)
So recently I am have been searching for (information on) preschool education on abroad on the Internet, and I find found out there are many differences between each country.(Notes: First of all, well done! The 'mistakes' I found are pretty tiny. People will still mostly understand what you're trying to say. Secondly, feel free to ask any follow-up questions. I'll be happy to answer if I can.)
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