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Hi everyone!
Today, I write (am writing) my first "article".  So, sorry (please bear with me) if I do lots of mistakes. When I woke up this morning, I opened my eyes and I looked at through (out of) my window... Waouh, all was white : the trees, my garden, ... Perhaps I'm strange but I really love the winter and the snow!
Suddenly, I thought I was lucky because I'm sure that some people in some countries don't (doesn't) know (about) the snow or do never so it (would never see it).
So, I decided to show you those wonderful landscapes!

Thanks' for (to) people who will correct me, goodbye

29/12/2014 -->

Hi everyone!
Today, I am writing my first "article", so sorry if I do make lots of mistakes. When I woke up this morning, I opened my eyes and I looked at through my window... Waouh, all Everything was white; : the trees, my garden, ... Perhaps I'm strange, but I really love the winter and the snow!
Suddenly, I thought I was lucky because I'm sure that some people in some countries have never experienced don't know the snow or do never so it.
So I decided to show you thise wonderful landscapes!

Thanks' for people who will your corrections me, goodbye. 

Bé

29/12/2014 -->

Hi everyone!
Today, I am writing my first "article", so I apologize if I do lots of mistakes. When I woke up this morning, I opened my eyes and I looked through my window... Woah, everything was white : the trees, my garden, ... Perhaps I'm strange but I really love the winter and the snow!
Suddenly, I thought I was lucky because I'm sure that some people in some countries don't know the snow or do never so it have never seen snow. 
So I decided to show you these wonderful landscapes!

Thanks' for people who will correct me, goodbye

Bé

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29/12/2014 -->

Hi everyone!
Today, I write (am writing) my first "article", so sorry if I do make lots of mistakes. When I woke up this morning, I opened my eyes and I looked at through my (out of the) window... Waouh (And I thought "Wow!">, all (everything) was white: the trees, my <the> garden, ... Perhaps I'm strange but I really love the winter and the snow!
Suddenly [Not technically wrong, but sounds a bit weird], I thought I was (felt) lucky because I'm sure that some people in some countries don't know the snow or do never so it (have never seen snow in their lives). 
So I decided to show you those (these) wonderful landscapes!

Thanks' for people who will correct me, goodbye <Thanks in advance for any corrections.>

<Bye! / See you later! >

Bé

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Very well done! :) If you have any questions, feel free to ask!