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<em>Antonio:</em> <em>I will re-write this story as if I were writing it in the United States using English.</em>
Story
Therefore,after an excellent dinner with fish basis,he and hers grirlfriend go to do a tour with car.They park in seafront and while they look the sea,he start to kiss and bite she with force.She isn't sorry this,at some point,hers lips start to bleed and she look in the rearview mirror she observe with horror two big love bit in the hers neck.After this,he say come back at home.She try convince it to stay,but he repeat come back at home.They discuss at home a long time,after they make love,but in the end she was unhappy for his performance.She dress and return at home since to say nothingh.She wash for 1 hour,she dry and look in the mirror your lips very swollen.She smile,but she have ugly smile.In the end she sleep and try to forget all.
Story
After an excellent fish dinner, he took his girlfriend for a ride in his car. They parked by the beach and looked at the ocean in front of them. He leaned over to kiss her, but instead bit here lip. Her lip started to bleed and when she looked in the rearview miror, she had two big bites on her neck. He then invited her back to his house. She refused, but he finally convinced her to come. Once they arrived back at his home, they talked for a long time. Afterwards, they made love. She was not satisfied with his "love" related performance. She dressed herself and said nothing as she left. She took a long bath, then dried off and looked in the mirror at her very swollen lips. She smiles at little in the mirror, then went to sleep in an attempt to try and forget about what happened earlier in the day.
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0 votedMarch 28, 20140The last day of the week
Today is Friday, I can go home after I finish my afternoon class in the afternoon. I feel so excited! I can eat many the delicious food that my mother cooks. This week I also have had some problems in TOEFL. It feels so hard. in this stuff and I've found that it is so difficult to learn a foreign language. But if I still need to keep going, in this way and may be maybe I can find some other interesting things to distract attract my attention in to English.
Best wishes!
0 votedMarch 28, 20140- Hi, here in the United States, the phrase, "I'm going to call in a favor" would be slang for something similar to the following: It implies that you will be asking a friend for assistance or help with something. It also implies that your friend may owe you some help because you have helped them at some point in the past.0 votedMarch 28, 20140
Living in big cities - Please, have a look and correct my essay
Nowadays, people tend to move to big cities for to finding find better job opportunities. However, some people think settling in developing cities has harmful consequences for people’s health. Personally, I still believe there are several benefits to citizen living in big cities besides its drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is true that the lives life in big cities do does negatively affect badly people’s health. Firstly, the level of pollution in big cities, such as air pollution from traffic fumes or industries, leads to several respiratory problems, including asthma or lung cancer. In Hanoi, for example, there are hundreds of patient patients taken to the hospital related to asthma everyday; therefore, citizens have to wear face masks in order to protect themselves when going out. Finally, the food with unknown origin is becoming an obsession of the for people living there. It has experienced many Many people have been taken to the hospital because as a result of of food poisoning or eating contaminated food in big cities.
On the other hand, there are some advantages of living in big cities in terms of people’s health. The first thing that should be needed to mention mentioned is the advanced hospital facilities in larger cities. which is much more modern than these in small cities. The medical staffs there are very skilled, so they are able to deal with almost any case. In addition Additionally, the people living in big cities have greater better awareness and lower rates of disease as a result of receiving timely commun ications from authorities.
In conclusion, I agree with the idea that the lives in big cities do does harm to people’s health.0 votedMarch 25, 20142I like your story and get the idea of what your are writing about. I'll make some grammar and sentence structure corrections:
She likes me!
Hi! everyone!
Well, i I dont know how to do this. Let me tell you my love story!
A Few few days ago, iI have met a beautiful girl, she is from another other country, we are knowing each other, but she knows, she likes me, we chat everyday or we can do it! she She is tender, intelligent, smart, talented and hard-working. but But, she feels like a bad girl and I dont believe that.
Sometimes i I feel she is sad when I hear her voice so, she asks me -Why do I like you?- I answer her - I don't know why exactly. i I don't know why i I want you (ahh como se dice yo te quiero, pero sin usar la palabra "love"?) I like her body, eyes, hair, legs, and skin, I'm not going to deny that.
I am a happy man, i I like to have fun with my friends and family. But when she talks to me, she makes me feel good, happy and i I make her smiling smile, it could be because we try to be honest with each other, but she still feels a little some afraid of me, i I can understand that because our cultures are different... in fact she likes me.
Thanks for your help!<em>Here is how I would write this passage in my native English:</em>
She likes me!!!
Hello everyone!
I'm not sure exactly how to write this type of essay. I will give it a try by writing about a love story.
A few days ago, I met a beautiful girl. Although we know each other, she is from another country. We talk almost every day and I have found her to be caring, smart and hard-working. I can't understand why she considers herself to be a bad girl though.
Sometimes I can tell that she is sad when we talk. She has inquired what it is that I like about her. I've told her that I don't know exactly why I like her, but I do know why I like her. I like her eyes, hair, body, skin and legs.
I am a happy man. I like to have fun with my friends and family. But when I talk to her, I am even happier. She makes me feel good and I love to make her smile. I believe we communicate and connect on a high level because we are alway honest with each other. She does however become shy with me occasionally.
I know she likes me, so it doesn't bother me that she can be a little shy. Maybe I should expect her to be shy because we are from different cultures.
0 votedMarch 22, 20142Can I ask you about yourself?
I had a part time job when I was living in Japan.
I've worked at a soba-restaurant. It was a kind of fast food restaurant.
Because our customers preferred dishes that were prepared very quickly.
My colleagues always helped me. I like them.
One of my customers was blind.
I sometimes led him to a chair in our restaurant.
Customers always carried their plate, but not the blind customer.
I often carried a plate to him.
And I described where his glass of water and soba were located.
My colleagues would say the blind customer is strange each time he came to the restaurant.
My colleagues didn't like him.
My colleagues said we don't want him to come again.
Because he needed help to eat in our restaurant.
We had very little extra time to help him because we were always very busy.
And our owner had a problem. We didn't have a-ticket vending machine for blind people.
Our restaurant had very little space to lead him around.
But he liked our restaurant.
He said thank you for our kindness.
I quit the part time job.
I want him to go eat at a restaurant that is more welcoming for a blind person.
I escaped.
I didn't do it for him.0 votedMarch 22, 20140Lets make a toast!
It seems that you had your hair cut today.
I think that you are awesome and groovy, as usual.
These days it is the date that I can realize by Internet what you have cut your hair even.
I just realized that you opened a can of beer.
Good work today, let`s make a toast!
It does not matter but what this side Japan is Morning now.0 votedMarch 22, 20140
