30天中文写作挑战 (8/30) – 电视剧：我和我的十七岁

（可是，因为一个误会，艾麗絲转了学，并且和其他三个人失去了联系。）

十三年以后，艾麗絲变成一个悲伤女人（冷漠的人）。她跟她的同事很坏（关系不好）。
何皓一从美国倒（到）她的公司来。他见面艾麗絲，但是她她忽略他。（他见到了艾麗絲，但她对他非常冷漠。）
白舒蕾也进入公司是行銷部經理。她对艾麗絲(做的事）很生气。
事故之后，艾麗絲失去记忆，她想她十七岁。（她的记忆停留在了十七岁）
她不懂为什么她跟她的朋友接了（断了联系）。
何皓一帮忙（助）她适应她新的环境。
我很喜欢这个电视剧。人物是（角色很）可爱，音乐很好听。
因为他们说得很快， 所以我用法文的字幕。
到现在，我看了八个集。我期待着下集！




Today is day 8 of my writing challenge. To compensate for yesterday's short entry, I have written quite a lot today (at least for my current level of Chinese, because I don't doubt other people must write very long entries!). Thank you in advance for your help and advices! Have a wonderful day! Here is the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :

I am currently watching the Taiwanese drama “Love @ seventeen”. It is about a girl named Alice, she has two very good friends named Bai Shu Lei and Liu Xiao Fen. Liu Xiao Fen discovers that she has a twin brother named He Hao Yi. While they all become friends, Alice falls in love with He Hao Yi. But, after a misunderstanding, Bai Shu Lei, Liu Xiao Fen and He Hao Yi stop speaking with Alice. She moves to another school. Thirtheen years later, Alice has become a very sad girl. She is very mean with her colleagues. He Hao Yi arrived from the USA to work in her company. He meets Alice, but she ignores him. Bai Shu Lei has also entered the company as a Marketing Director. She is very angry towards Alice. After an accident, Alice lose her memory, and she thinks that she is still 17. She doesn’t understand with her friends and her got separated. He Hao Yi helps her to adapt to her new environment. I really like this drama. The characters are touching, and the musics are great. As they speak very fast, I need to use the French subtitles. Up to now, I have watched 8 episodes. I am looking forward for the next one!

基本语法 ／ Some basic grammar practice

我现在在一家叫「MAY ONE」的百货大楼的书店里的咖啡店。我正在喝杏仁焦糖拿铁咖啡。

Maak，this sentence is grammaricaly right.You did a good job:),buz this one is kinda complex .But, actually,it sounds a little strange in China. So, I want to show you a more native way:

我现在在一家叫 MAY ONE的百货大楼里。我在其中一家书店的咖啡馆里喝杏仁焦糖拿铁咖啡。

“其中”in this sentence means that “one of the shops"

by the way,I hope you have a good time with your friends in Janpan: )

Update

I am experimenting with grammar and words I don't really understand. I'm sure there are mistakes!

下午好。
我现在在一家叫「Mos Burger」的饭馆。我正在吃午饭。我正在吃汉堡。这是很or真好吃。我也在喝咖啡。
我正在看（一本）侦探小说，这叫「Deep Water」。（这本书）不是不很有趣。 

ps：we added “不“ in front of”是“in Chinese,”不是”is a phrase。but we never say “不是有趣”，“很”must be added in it or in another way you can say "不有趣”。

the words in （）in yellow background means that you can add it in the sentence or not，the words in yellow background means that it must be there。and you have done a good job，buz you made yourself understood by native Madarin speaker，but，dear，I want to show you another more native way to write the sentence。may be it is a little challenging for u，but just try it ： ）。

我现在在一家叫Mos Burger的饭馆吃午饭，我的午饭有汉堡和咖啡，这家店的汉堡很好吃。

我最近正在看一本叫做Deep water的侦探小说，这本书有点无聊。

Good afternoon.
I am now at a restaurant called "Mos Burger". I am eating lunch. I am eating a hamburger. It is delicious. I am also drinking coffee.
I am reading a detective novel. It's called "Deep Water". It is not interesting.

再见！