30天中文写作挑战 (8/30) – 电视剧：我和我的十七岁
现在我看台湾电视剧《我和我的十七岁》。
有一个姑娘叫艾麗絲，他有两个很朋友叫白舒蕾和劉曉芬。
劉曉芬查出她有一个双生弟弟叫何皓一。
随着他们都成为朋友，艾麗絲爱上何皓一了。
可是，一个口舌后，白舒蕾、劉曉芬和何皓一跟艾麗絲停说。她改变学校。
十三年以后，艾麗絲变成一个悲伤女人。她跟她的同事很坏。
何皓一从美国倒她的公司来。他见面艾麗絲，但是她她忽略他。
白舒蕾也进入公司是行銷部經理。她对艾麗絲很生气。
事故之后，艾麗絲失去记忆，她想她十七岁。
她不懂为什么她跟她的朋友接了。
何皓一帮忙她适应她新的环境。
我很喜欢这个电视剧。人物是可爱，音乐很好听。
因为他们说得很快， 所以我用法文的字幕。
到现在，我看了八个集。我期待着下集！
Today is day 8 of my writing challenge. To compensate for yesterday's short entry, I have written quite a lot today (at least for my current level of Chinese, because I don't doubt other people must write very long entries!). Thank you in advance for your help and advices! Have a wonderful day! Here is the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
I am currently watching the Taiwanese drama “Love @ seventeen”. It is about a girl named Alice, she has two very good friends named Bai Shu Lei and Liu Xiao Fen. Liu Xiao Fen discovers that she has a twin brother named He Hao Yi. While they all become friends, Alice falls in love with He Hao Yi. But, after a misunderstanding, Bai Shu Lei, Liu Xiao Fen and He Hao Yi stop speaking with Alice. She moves to another school. Thirtheen years later, Alice has become a very sad girl. She is very mean with her colleagues. He Hao Yi arrived from the USA to work in her company. He meets Alice, but she ignores him. Bai Shu Lei has also entered the company as a Marketing Director. She is very angry towards Alice. After an accident, Alice lose her memory, and she thinks that she is still 17. She doesn’t understand with her friends and her got separated. He Hao Yi helps her to adapt to her new environment. I really like this drama. The characters are touching, and the musics are great. As they speak very fast, I need to use the French subtitles. Up to now, I have watched 8 episodes. I am looking forward for the next one!
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30天中文写作挑战 (8/30) – 电视剧：我和我的十七岁
最近现在我看了一部台湾电视剧《我和我的十七岁》。有一个姑娘叫艾麗絲，他她有两个很好的（good）朋友叫白舒蕾和劉曉芬。
劉曉芬查出她有一个双生弟弟叫何皓一。
随后着他们都成为朋友，艾麗絲爱上何皓一了。
可是，一个误会之后（a misunderstanding）口舌后，白舒蕾、劉曉芬和何皓一跟不不理睬艾麗絲了停说。，所以她改变转学了学校。
十三年以后，艾麗絲变成一个悲伤女人女孩（女人=woman 女孩=girl）。她对待她的同事很坏。
何皓一从美国倒到她的公司来。他见到了面艾麗絲，但是她她无视忽略他。
白舒蕾也进入了公司，是一位（as a）行銷部經理。她对艾麗絲很生气。
发生事故之后，艾麗絲失去了记忆，而且（and）她觉得她还是（and she thinks that she is still ）十七岁。
她不能理解为什么她的朋友不理她而且疏远她。She doesn’t understand with her friends and her got separated.
何皓一帮忙助（帮助=sound more help,not just do a favor）她适应她新的环境。
我很喜欢这个电视剧。人物很感动（touching）是可爱，音乐也（and）很好听。
因为他们说得很快， 所以我用法文的字幕。
直到（Up to now）到现在，我看了八个集。，我期待着下一集！（一=one 二=two 三=tree,etc..)
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Good word! keep going! I like Taiwanese drama, too.
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30天中文写作挑战 (8/30) – 电视剧：我和我的十七岁
现在（用"最近"更好）我在看（一部）台湾电视剧《我和我的十七岁》。有一个姑娘叫艾麗絲，他有两个很朋友叫白舒蕾和劉曉芬。
劉曉芬查出她有一个双生（"双胞胎"更常用）弟弟叫何皓一。
随着（时间流逝）他们都成为（了）朋友，艾麗絲爱上（了）何皓一了。
可是，一个口舌后，白舒蕾、劉曉芬和何皓一跟艾麗絲停说。她改变学校。
（可是，因为一个误会，艾麗絲转了学，并且和其他三个人失去了联系。）
十三年以后，艾麗絲变成一个悲伤女人（冷漠的人）。她跟她的同事很坏（关系不好）。
何皓一从美国倒（到）她的公司来。他见面艾麗絲，但是她她忽略他。（他见到了艾麗絲，但她对他非常冷漠。）
白舒蕾也进入公司是行銷部經理。她对艾麗絲(做的事）很生气。
事故之后，艾麗絲失去记忆，她想她十七岁。（她的记忆停留在了十七岁）
她不懂为什么她跟她的朋友接了（断了联系）。
何皓一帮忙（助）她适应她新的环境。
我很喜欢这个电视剧。人物是（角色很）可爱，音乐很好听。
因为他们说得很快， 所以我用法文的字幕。
到现在，我看了八个集。我期待着下集！
Today is day 8 of my writing challenge. To compensate for yesterday's short entry, I have written quite a lot today (at least for my current level of Chinese, because I don't doubt other people must write very long entries!). Thank you in advance for your help and advices! Have a wonderful day! Here is the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
I am currently watching the Taiwanese drama “Love @ seventeen”. It is about a girl named Alice, she has two very good friends named Bai Shu Lei and Liu Xiao Fen. Liu Xiao Fen discovers that she has a twin brother named He Hao Yi. While they all become friends, Alice falls in love with He Hao Yi. But, after a misunderstanding, Bai Shu Lei, Liu Xiao Fen and He Hao Yi stop speaking with Alice. She moves to another school. Thirtheen years later, Alice has become a very sad girl. She is very mean with her colleagues. He Hao Yi arrived from the USA to work in her company. He meets Alice, but she ignores him. Bai Shu Lei has also entered the company as a Marketing Director. She is very angry towards Alice. After an accident, Alice lose her memory, and she thinks that she is still 17. She doesn’t understand with her friends and her got separated. He Hao Yi helps her to adapt to her new environment. I really like this drama. The characters are touching, and the musics are great. As they speak very fast, I need to use the French subtitles. Up to now, I have watched 8 episodes. I am looking forward for the next one!
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30天中文写作挑战 (8/30) – 电视剧：我和我的十七岁
现在我(在)看台湾电视剧《我和我的十七岁》。有一个姑娘叫艾麗絲，他有两个很(好的)朋友叫白舒蕾和劉曉芬。
劉曉芬查出她有一个双生弟弟叫何皓一。
随着(後來）他们都成为朋友，（而）艾麗絲爱上何皓一了。
可是，一个口舌（一場誤會）后，白舒蕾、劉曉芬和何皓一跟艾麗絲停说（不再說話）。她改变学校（轉學了）。
十三年以后，艾麗絲变成一个悲伤女人。她跟（對）她的同事很坏。
何皓一从美国倒（到）她的公司来。他见面（見到）艾麗絲，但是她她忽略他。
白舒蕾也进入公司（，）是行銷部經理。她对艾麗絲很生气。
事故之后，艾麗絲失去记忆，她想她（以為她還是）十七岁。
她不懂为什么她跟她的朋友接了（分離了）。
何皓一帮忙她适应她新的环境。
我很喜欢这个电视剧。人物是可爱，音乐很好听。
因为他们说得很快， 所以我用法文的字幕。
到现在，我看了八个集。我期待着下集！
Today is day 8 of my writing challenge. To compensate for yesterday's short entry, I have written quite a lot today (at least for my current level of Chinese, because I don't doubt other people must write very long entries!). Thank you in advance for your help and advices! Have a wonderful day! Here is the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
I am currently watching the Taiwanese drama “Love @ seventeen”. It is about a girl named Alice, she has two very good friends named Bai Shu Lei and Liu Xiao Fen. Liu Xiao Fen discovers that she has a twin brother named He Hao Yi. While they all become friends, Alice falls in love with He Hao Yi. But, after a misunderstanding, Bai Shu Lei, Liu Xiao Fen and He Hao Yi stop speaking with Alice. She moves to another school. Thirtheen years later, Alice has become a very sad girl. She is very mean with her colleagues. He Hao Yi arrived from the USA to work in her company. He meets Alice, but she ignores him. Bai Shu Lei has also entered the company as a Marketing Director. She is very angry towards Alice. After an accident, Alice lose her memory, and she thinks that she is still 17. She doesn’t understand with her friends and her got separated. He Hao Yi helps her to adapt to her new environment. I really like this drama. The characters are touching, and the musics are great. As they speak very fast, I need to use the French subtitles. Up to now, I have watched 8 episodes. I am looking forward for the next one!
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30天中文写作挑战 (8/30) – 电视剧：我和我的十七岁
现在我(在)看台湾电视剧《我和我的十七岁》。（剧中）有一个姑娘叫艾麗絲，他她有两个很好朋友叫白舒蕾和劉曉芬。
劉曉芬查出她有一个双栾生弟弟叫何皓一。
随着后他们都成为朋友，艾麗絲爱上何皓一了。
可是，一个场口舌后，白舒蕾、劉曉芬和何皓一跟艾麗絲停不说话了。她改变换了学校。（or她转学了）
十三年以后，艾麗絲变成一个悲伤女人。她跟她的同事很坏。
何皓一从美国倒到她的公司来。他见到面艾麗絲，但是她她忽略不愿理他。
白舒蕾也进入公司，是行銷部經理。她对艾麗絲很生气。
事故之后，艾麗絲失去记忆，她想她（的）十七岁。
她不懂为什么她跟她的朋友接掰了。（or分手了）
何皓一帮忙她适应她的新的环境。
我很喜欢这个电视剧。人物是很可爱，音乐很好听。
因为他们说得很快， 所以我用法文的字幕。
到现在，我看了八个集。我期待着下集！
Today is day 8 of my writing challenge. To compensate for yesterday's short entry, I have written quite a lot today (at least for my current level of Chinese, because I don't doubt other people must write very long entries!). Thank you in advance for your help and advices! Have a wonderful day! Here is the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
I am currently watching the Taiwanese drama “Love @ seventeen”. It is about a girl named Alice, she has two very good friends named Bai Shu Lei and Liu Xiao Fen. Liu Xiao Fen discovers that she has a twin brother named He Hao Yi. While they all become friends, Alice falls in love with He Hao Yi. But, after a misunderstanding, Bai Shu Lei, Liu Xiao Fen and He Hao Yi stop speaking with Alice. She moves to another school. Thirtheen years later, Alice has become a very sad girl. She is very mean with her colleagues. He Hao Yi arrived from the USA to work in her company. He meets Alice, but she ignores him. Bai Shu Lei has also entered the company as a Marketing Director. She is very angry towards Alice. After an accident, Alice lose her memory, and she thinks that she is still 17. She doesn’t understand with her friends and her got separated. He Hao Yi helps her to adapt to her new environment. I really like this drama. The characters are touching, and the musics are great. As they speak very fast, I need to use the French subtitles. Up to now, I have watched 8 episodes. I am looking forward for the next one!
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30天中文写作挑战 (8/30) – 电视剧：我和我的十七岁
现在我在看台湾电视剧《我和我的十七岁》。有一个姑娘叫艾麗絲，他有两个很好的朋友叫白舒蕾和劉曉芬。
劉曉芬查出她有一个双生弟弟叫何皓一。
随着他们都成为了朋友，艾麗絲爱上何皓一了。
可是，一个口舌（？误会吗？如果是误会要改为“一场误会”）后，白舒蕾、劉曉芬和何皓一跟艾麗絲停说（？）。她转学了。
十三年以后，艾麗絲变成一个悲伤女人。她和她的同事很坏。
何皓一从美国到她的公司来。他与艾麗絲见面，但是她她忽略他。
白舒蕾也进入公司，是行銷部經理。她对艾麗絲很生气。
事故之后，艾麗絲失去记忆，她回到她十七岁。
她不懂为什么她跟她的朋友绝交了。
何皓一帮忙她适应她新的环境。
我很喜欢这个电视剧。人物是很可爱，音乐很好听。
因为他们说得很快， 所以我用法文的字幕。
到现在，我看了八集。我期待着下集！
Today is day 8 of my writing challenge. To compensate for yesterday's short entry, I have written quite a lot today (at least for my current level of Chinese, because I don't doubt other people must write very long entries!). Thank you in advance for your help and advices! Have a wonderful day! Here is the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
I am currently watching the Taiwanese drama “Love @ seventeen”. It is about a girl named Alice, she has two very good friends named Bai Shu Lei and Liu Xiao Fen. Liu Xiao Fen discovers that she has a twin brother named He Hao Yi. While they all become friends, Alice falls in love with He Hao Yi. But, after a misunderstanding, Bai Shu Lei, Liu Xiao Fen and He Hao Yi stop speaking with Alice. She moves to another school. Thirtheen years later, Alice has become a very sad girl. She is very mean with her colleagues. He Hao Yi arrived from the USA to work in her company. He meets Alice, but she ignores him. Bai Shu Lei has also entered the company as a Marketing Director. She is very angry towards Alice. After an accident, Alice lose her memory, and she thinks that she is still 17. She doesn’t understand with her friends and her got separated. He Hao Yi helps her to adapt to her new environment. I really like this drama. The characters are touching, and the musics are great. As they speak very fast, I need to use the French subtitles. Up to now, I have watched 8 episodes. I am looking forward for the next one!
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