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基本语法 / Some basic grammar practice 我现在在一家叫「MAY ONE」的百货大楼的书店的咖啡店。正在喝杏仁焦糖拿铁咖啡。

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基本语法 / Some basic grammar practice

我现在在一家叫「MAY ONE」的百货大楼的书店的咖啡店。正在喝杏仁焦糖拿铁咖啡。

 

语法准确,只是第一句比较绕口,一般我们不太将几个的连在一起,可以这样说

我现在在一家叫「MAY ONE」的咖啡店,它在百货大楼的书店里。

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基本语法 / Some basic grammar practice

我现在在一家叫「MAY ONE」的百货大楼的书店的咖啡店。正在喝杏仁焦糖拿铁咖啡。

It sounds good that you are enjoying yourself but I think the first sentence is a bit unnatural. 

我觉得这么说会好点儿:我现在在一家叫做“MAY ONE”百货大楼中的书店的咖啡店里。 

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基本语法 / Some basic grammar practice

我现在在一家叫「MAY ONE」的百货大楼的书店里的咖啡店。我正在喝杏仁焦糖拿铁咖啡。

Maak,this sentence is grammaricaly right.You did a good job:),buz this one is kinda complex .But, actually,it sounds a little strange in China. So, I want to show you a more native way:

我现在在一家叫 MAY ONE的百货大楼里。我在其中一家书店的咖啡馆里喝杏仁焦糖拿铁咖啡。

“其中”in this sentence means that “one of the shops"


by the way,I hope you have a good time with your friends in Janpan: )

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I also like this kind of feeling
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Yes - on the top floor of the department store there is a bookstore. In the bookstore there is a cafe. (The idea is that you can buy your books or magazines, and then read them over coffee. It is very popular.)

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