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It was the first time I have visited a materials library. The materials library left a very deep impression on me. The biggest relative advantage of a materials library is that students can get an up-close look at the all materials; otherwise, it’s not easy to get chance to see that many materials. Students can find variety types of materials in the library; it could give students inspiration from one field to another field. For example, if we plan to design a table, wood or glass are the materials we mostly might consider. When I walk into the materials library, I realized there are so many choices I do have. Maybe I can combine fabrics with hard materials to make special texture feeling of the table. That is the compatibility of the materials library diffuse among students.
Also, from the materials library, students can find out how many types and colors of materials could be. There are so many different ways to make a same type of thing in our daily life, but we can only bring a few ideas up when we want to design a thing. I believe a materials library helps students a lot to woke up their potential creative ability. In addition, they can test those materials out. Testing is a big important thing for designing. Sometimes we cannot imagine how it looks like in real life when we only see materials on the web; it could be way different than we thought. The last point that diffuse is observe-ability. Students learn how to choose right materials from a tons of resource that need good observability.
The opinion leaders among CoD students that brought this new materials library to other students’ life. From that time, students started realizing the library could comes in many forms not only the one to collect books. The opinion leaders opened students’ minds and made them have a new recognition of libraries. So they will not think library is kinda a boring place anymore. It could be fun and very helpful for their future work and study.0 votedFebruary 9, 20150- Anyone can correct my grammar mistakes? Please help me to correct it, thanks! ============================ It was the first time I have visited a materials library. The materials library left a very deep impression on me. The biggest relative advantage of a materials library is that students can get an up-close look at the all materials; otherwise, it’s not easy to get chance to see that many materials. Students can find variety types of materials in the library; it could give students inspiration from one field to another field. For example, if we plan to design a table, wood or glass are the materials we mostly might consider. When I walk into the materials library, I realized there are so many choices I do have. Maybe I can combine fabrics with hard materials to make special texture feeling of the table. That is the compatibility of the materials library diffuse among students. Also, from the materials library, students can find out how many types and colors of materials could be. There are so many different ways to make a same type of thing in our daily life, but we can only bring a few ideas up when we want to design a thing. I believe a materials library helps students a lot to woke up their potential creative ability. In addition, they can test those materials out. Testing is a big important thing for designing. Sometimes we cannot imagine how it looks like in real life when we only see materials on the web; it could be way different than we thought. The last point that diffuse is observe-ability. Students learn how to choose right materials from a tons of resource that need good observability. The opinion leaders among CoD students that brought this new materials library to other students’ life. From that time, students started realizing the library could comes in many forms not only the one to collect books.February 9, 201540
- anyone can help me check the grammar mistakes? The Summary of ‘China Chic: East Meets West’ In the article “China Chic: Eat meets West”, the author Steele & Major discuss about the history of foot binding. Steele & Major give many sources of foot binding based on Chinese literature. Based on these literature, initially foot binding only appeared at the imperial court. As time passed, foot binding spread of all over the country. The author introduced the progress of foot binding. The procedure of foot binding was very painful and it would breaking the arch of the foot. Although foot binding was extreme painful, some Chinese women supported foot binding, because they thought small feet was a symbol as sexually attractive. They thought it was ritual and usually presided over by their mother. In their opinion binding feet could help them get a rich husband if they did that tightly and good. Ebrey suggests the reason of why Chinese women binding feet is that foot binding can distinguish between Chinese women and Chinese men, also it distinguish between Chinese and non-Chinese. In the Mid-seventeenth century, the Manchus established the Qing dynasty and they activated edict to stop foot binding. But in their eyes, binding feet just like an important symbol of the age, it is even worse than death for them. The sociologist Thorstein Veblen believes foot binding is a kind of leisure, because they supposedly inconvenient to work or walk, but foot binding was not cause any inconvenient. Nowadays, Westerners thought was not a good thing to women. The new generation also argued that foot binding is a kind of backward traditional Chinese culture.June 23, 201430
老外和淘宝
来中国后我想要买一些东西了，我问了我的朋友怎么办，他建议我可以试一试淘宝，可是我需要中国的银行卡。我说了他: 没有，就只有外国卡。后来我觉得我该查一下那个淘宝网站。哪那里有很多很多有用的东西，我都想买 :)。但是我却没有合适可以用的银行卡，虽然我试着注册了我的国家的卡了。我吃惊发现了那银行卡也可以用，我很开心。
第一天我买了一些东西，但是比较多词我看不懂，所以我我包裹到的时候我发现我订单购了别的货物。我很生气觉得卖家寄给我不要的东西，后来朋友向我说明 我没订单我要的移动电源，但是定订了电源线。我笑着告诉他我是一个笨蛋，下次会读全部描述。还有别的问题，要是快递到了我住的地方他就给我打电话，可是我经常听不懂他说的话，所以告诉他我是外国人我听不懂，你给我发短信。有时候她笑有时候有一点生气，我不理他 哈哈。终于我以认为那淘宝非常方便，另外可以学习一些生词 :)
0 votedApril 28, 20140我的爱好旅游
我有三个爱好：出门旅游，喝咖啡，和玩游戏。
不知从什么时候起，出门旅游成了我的生活中的大事。
我喜欢出门旅游的原因就不是能用一句话概括的了。
第一的个原因：旅游的时候能开阔眼界睛, 了解别的国家的文化。
第二：能学习外语言。我觉得学习外语言很有意思，而且会说外语言的人有更多的工作机会，能在许多国家工作。
第三：能交各种各样的朋友。比如说，我在中国不但交了中国朋友，而且交了韩国朋友，美国朋友，什么的。
第四：如今，出门旅游越来越方便。互联上网随手一点，可以很容易找到飞机票，丁冰棺的信息，还可以跟别的人商量旅游，比如，什么地方最有意思，最美丽吗？
第五：享受生活！可以说这个原因是最重要的！0 votedApril 28, 20140四月二十三日
我觉得今天晚上睡不到觉了，所以写一些中文。一般地说我写中文之后就很累。今天我去shades公园徒步路旅行(tu2bu4lu4xing2)。今天那个公园很安静。除了安静以外还很美丽。这里春天总与终于来了！树们都有绿色的叶子，山坡(shan1po1 hillside)有很软的草地。我在那个公园看见了糖河。现在那条河又宽又绿。在shades公园里几乎所有左右的植物都很绿。糖河是嫩绿的，树叶是青绿的，草地是碧绿的。我的学院也有一些花。海棠树(hai3tang2shu4 crabapple trees)有又白又大的花。这里的松鼠忙着找食物。我在shades公园看到一只狸子（lizi3 racoon)。他一看我，就爬上一棵树。现在他们都很胖。
上个周末是复活节。对我来说，这是最重要的节日。虽然我认为复活节很重要，在四年中只有一次能回家。这次去教堂我觉得很别扭因为我很长时间没去教堂。除了吃太多巧克力以外，还跟我的弟弟玩了。最近比较烦可是上个周末很平安。能跟我爸爸和妈妈讨论讨论有什么安排。
现在越来越晚。我应该睡觉，可是明天还有好多事。0 votedApril 23, 20140
