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anyone can help me check the grammar mistakes? The Summary of ‘China Chic: East Meets West’ In the article “China Chic: Eat meets West”, the author Steele & Major discuss about the history of foot binding. Steele & Major give many sources of foot binding based on Chinese literature. Based on these literature, initially foot binding only appeared at the imperial court. As time passed, foot binding spread of all over the country. The author introduced the progress of foot binding. The procedure of foot binding was very painful and it would breaking the arch of the foot. Although foot binding was extreme painful, some Chinese women supported foot binding, because they thought small feet was a symbol as sexually attractive. They thought it was ritual and usually presided over by their mother. In their opinion binding feet could help them get a rich husband if they did that tightly and good. Ebrey suggests the reason of why Chinese women binding feet is that foot binding can distinguish between Chinese women and Chinese men, also it distinguish between Chinese and non-Chinese. In the Mid-seventeenth century, the Manchus established the Qing dynasty and they activated edict to stop foot binding. But in their eyes, binding feet just like an important symbol of the age, it is even worse than death for them. The sociologist Thorstein Veblen believes foot binding is a kind of leisure, because they supposedly inconvenient to work or walk, but foot binding was not cause any inconvenient. Nowadays, Westerners thought was not a good thing to women. The new generation also argued that foot binding is a kind of backward traditional Chinese culture.

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anyone can help me check the grammar mistakes?

The Summary of ‘China Chic: East Meets West’
In the article “China Chic: Eat meets West”, the author Steele & Major discuss about the history of foot binding. Steele & Major give many sources of foot binding based on Chinese literature. Based on these literature According to the literature, initially foot binding only appeared at the imperial court. As time passed, foot binding spread of all over the country.
The author introduced the progress of foot binding. The procedure of foot binding was very painful, and it would breaking the arch of the foot. Although foot binding was extreme painful, some Chinese women supported foot binding, because they thought small feet was a symbolized femenine sexuality as sexually attractive. They thought of it was as a ritual, and it was usually presided over by their mother. In their opinion They thought binding their feet could help them get a rich husband if they did that it tightly and good well enough. Ebrey suggests the reason of why that Chinese women binding bound their feet is was that foot binding can distinguished between Chinese women and from Chinese men, and also it distinguished between Chinese and from non-Chinese. In the Mid-seventeenth century, the Manchus established the Qing dynasty, and they activated enacted an edict to stop foot binding. But in their eyes for Chinese women of that time, binding feet just like was an important symbol of the age, making the edict a fate it is even worse than death for them.
The sociologist Thorstein Veblen believes foot binding is was a kind sign of a life of leisure, because they it supposedly made it inconvenient to work or walk, but foot binding was did not cause any inconvenient inconvenience. Nowadays, Westerners thought think it was not a good thing to for women. The new generation has also argued that foot binding is a kind of backwards, traditional Chinese culture.

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