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It was the first time I have visited a materials library. The materials library left a very deep impression on me. The biggest relative advantage of a materials library is that students can get an up-close look at the all materials; otherwise, it’s not easy to get chance to see that many materials. Students can find variety types of materials in the library; it could give students inspiration from one field to another field. For example, if we plan to design a table, wood or glass are the materials we mostly might consider. When I walk into the materials library, I realized there are so many choices I do have. Maybe I can combine fabrics with hard materials to make special texture feeling of the table. That is the compatibility of the materials library diffuse among students.
Also, from the materials library, students can find out how many types and colors of materials could be. There are so many different ways to make a same type of thing in our daily life, but we can only bring a few ideas up when we want to design a thing. I believe a materials library helps students a lot to woke up their potential creative ability. In addition, they can test those materials out. Testing is a big important thing for designing. Sometimes we cannot imagine how it looks like in real life when we only see materials on the web; it could be way different than we thought. The last point that diffuse is observe-ability. Students learn how to choose right materials from a tons of resource that need good observability.
The opinion leaders among CoD students that brought this new materials library to other students’ life. From that time, students started realizing the library could comes in many forms not only the one to collect books.
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This content violates our Community Guidelines.June 28, 2014
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This content violates our Community Guidelines.June 28, 2014
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anyone can help me check the grammar mistakes?
The Summary of ‘China Chic: East Meets West’
In the article “China Chic: Eat meets West”, the author Steele & Major discuss about the history of foot binding. Steele & Major give many sources of foot binding based on Chinese literature. Based on these literature, initially foot binding only appeared at the imperial court. As time passed, foot binding spread of all over the country.
The author introduced the progress of foot binding. The procedure of foot binding was very painful and it would breaking the arch of the foot. Although foot binding was extreme painful, some Chinese women supported foot binding, because they thought small feet was a symbol as sexually attractive. They thought it was ritual and usually presided over by their mother. In their opinion binding feet could help them get a rich husband if they did that tightly and good. Ebrey suggests the reason of why Chinese women binding feet is that foot binding can distinguish between Chinese women and Chinese men, also it distinguish between Chinese and non-Chinese. In the Mid-seventeenth century, the Manchus established the Qing dynasty and they activated edict to stop foot binding. But in their eyes, binding feet just like an important symbol of the age, it is even worse than death for them.
The sociologist Thorstein Veblen believes foot binding is a kind of leisure, because they supposedly inconvenient to work or walk, but foot binding was not cause any inconvenient. Nowadays, Westerners thought was not a good thing to women. The new generation also argued that foot binding is a kind of backward traditional Chinese culture.
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April 7, 2014
I have done with my last midterm just now. I feel upset. I didn't pay attention on class. In order to get a better grade I studied a lot during this weekend. But I still did very poor. Anyway it past. I decided take a rest tonight. "I will pay more attention on class from now on" I always said that to myself after exams. Words are easier than to do :( I am the person who can't keep his words. Sometimes I don't like myself...
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Recently
Many things happened recently and I can't control them well. Let me talk about something bad first. There is a annoying guy, he has a rich family and a terrible temper. At the beginning we don't know him well, we just hanged out together. And then we became friend, I don't really like to eating with him, because he talks too much. He is from St. Louis. He likes to show off everything when we had dinner together. He talked how expensive his clothes are; how good his car is and how many shoes he has. And he repeated saying one thousand times of these things. I just want to say: who cares? He likes to use commanding tone to talk to us, if we are different from what he expected we to do, he will be piss off. Anyway, there is no one like him. We can't do anything, just avoid to meet him.
This is a really tough week for me. I had two midterms :/ I was not pay attention in class so there are lots stuff I have to restudy...
I had a bad mood these two days. I don't want to talk, I don't want to reply message, I don't want to communication with people. Maybe I should adjust my schedule...Still up too late is not for me
Good thing is I made a new friend last month. He is very nice. I met a boy and I think I like him, but we are not in a place so I'm very confuse. I don't know what should I do. So I told my friend the situation, and he gave me good suggestions and that made me feel calm and peace. He is older than me, he knows how to comfort people. Like I feel whatever he said was so right...He told me I shouldn't push, just slowly by slowly, understand him and know him better. At least he makes me feel much better, although I still don't know what is right for me.
April 4, 2014
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Happy birthday to myself!
My birthday is coming soon!!
Tomorrow is my birthday, i'll turn to 24. I think I should write something down to remember :) This morning I got many greeting from my friends and family members. I'm not decide how to celebrate my birthday tomorrow. I don't really want to celebrate birthday anymore after 18 years old, that makes me feel I'm getting older T_T
Good news is the SPRING BREAK also coming soon. I love spring, I hate the cold winter here. I want to dress my t-shirt and have barque with friends in spring. I am going to Tennessee and Chicago during my spring break :) I'm excited, i can't wait!
In China, some friends my age are married. I don't want to think about this serious question now, but if i find a right person maybe i will consider this question :) hmmm...maybe next year?? or the year after next?? lol, i really don't know. Why Chinese girls married so early? Do you really think a girls begin to go downhill once she reach twenty-five? Marriage shouldn't limited by age right? Anyway, don't get lost, keep you faith and go forward :)
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This content violates our Community Guidelines.March 2, 2014
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My resume. Who can help me correcting mistakes in the resume? Thanks a lot!
Dear Hiring Manager,
My name is XXX. I am an Industrial Design undergraduate student at Iowa State University, with a minor in general business. I am very excited about the Industrial position that you had listed on 2-Shanghai. My degree at Iowa State University with a concentration in product development and processes, I feel my profession goals makes me an ideal candidate for this position.
This position description mentioned we will join a team which in Shanghai and Hong Kong with professional designers. Most of my projects involved working as a team, communication our ideas between groups and dealing with problems in the process. We’ve been to many factories like John Deere, Assa Abloy to saw the manufacture, so I am familiar with visit factories and check the status of production and quality. During my studio course, we got lots experience of industrial and graphic design skills in creating new product. Also I’ve strong skills in 3D modeling. I’m very experienced to convert 2D into 3D in Solidworks. My business minor helps me to better understand customers and manage costs.
I am looking forward to join your team. Thanks for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing information from you!
Sincerely,
XXX
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Hello, 大家好,こんにちわ~
I learned Japanese just from few weeks ago. I can speak English and Chinese. I like japan, I like japan anime, japan TV show and I hope I can speak Japanese fluently someday!
頑張って!
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