Is it good in English this presentation ?

First of all, I wish to introduce myself. My name is Alberto and I graduated in Finance at the University of Rome Tor Vergata last November.

During my studies I had a great experience in Sweden where I spent five months as exchange student. I would like to recommend that experience, because I could live alone and try to solve every problem that occured. In doing so, I also tried to simulate real cases that will be able to occur in the future.

Moreover, I am a sunny person, who is also a team worked-oriented one. I always strive to reach my goals; however, if didn’t reach them, I would not give up but I would try to perform better.