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大家好啊,我是来自四川外国语大学的一名学生,出于日本文化的喜爱(特别是动漫的酷爱)而特别想学日语,我希望在italki可以找到一位想学中文的好友一起学习聊天,由于我是日语初学者,所以要是会对英文有一定的了解就更好了。请多关照啦
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    度假方式

    上个周末(在)中国过清明节了。你们度假怎么样? 有人或兜风或烹饪,<em>就是</em>千差万别。本人清明节(期间)赴了济南,以前我得知济南位于北京的北边。这次旅行我第一次坐了火车,(火车)犹如日本的新干线的样子。到了济南,我见面了(会见了)我的朋友,随后与他一起去济南的夜市。这儿(那儿),为了清明节,人庞大(很多),感觉大概一万多万人左右(“多”和“左右”不能一起用)。我总算用餐,喝了一口饮料,茶饭真是山珍海味。然而累得脑子都转不动了。
    第二天我们去济南的名胜。一个历史的建筑物(让)我感觉很多的历史变迁。久而久之,它迄今闻名于世,真是历史的杰作。我(以前)没去过所以不知道,可是不但中国,而且美国,欧洲乃至全世界一定有这样的杰作。我诠释了这样(我认为是这样的)。看了以后这种感觉就会越发强烈。如今我拼命地干(旅游),痛快地玩,以后也想赴很多的地方。

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    April 9, 2014
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    难忘记的时刻

    今天, 我想要谢谢我的妈妈 ,因为我可以找到我的小学朋友 (同学)。 我(觉得)看起来他们的脸(他们的脸看起来)不一样了 。 美丽和帅 想(像)一样大人 (大人一样)。 我还记得那个试过(时候)我们玩(在)一起,但那是六年前了 。 可是现在 , 我们很忙和(于)工作 。 我在想大概 , 我们讲父母(what's your meaning?)在五年 , 十年, 会十无(五)年以上。

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    February 22, 2014
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    “愿意" means agree,eg:我愿意卖这个房子=I agree to sell this house. “情愿”means agree in heart eg:如果过几天能和爸妈一起去草原,那么我这几天不看电视也可以=If a few days to go to the grassland and mom and Dad, so these days I don't watch TV too reluctant.
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    February 22, 2014
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    天天人魚

    我喜欢ariel的爸爸,他是一个人品(极品)男人魚。天天, 我的女儿在我说ariel看电视(要我跟她一起看电视),我不喜欢电视。我不喜欢电视。(delete)我爱她因此我们看电视(因为我爱她,所以我们一起看电视or 我爱她,因此我们一起看电视)。

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    February 22, 2014
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    Computers is good or bad?

    This essay is for the TOEFL ibt test.

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    Thanks to the development of advanced technology, our life has become  more convenient. They use computers at work, school, home and so forth. Now that computers have a great influence on our life, people will not work without computer. In this setting, I think that computers have made life easier and more convenient for everybody.

    I am a university student in Tokyo, the capital of Japan. Most university students use computers in their studies. In fact, students are supposed to submit reports of lectures on the Web. I think that is very convenient. Students do not need to write by hand and professors also can check their assignment on the computer. They can do their tasks with the help of a computer easily.

    Furthermore, though the Internet, people can keep contact with their friends and friends, even the distance is far away. Actually, when I was a high school student, I visited Australia - home . It has passed almost three years since I went to there. Yet I still keep contact with friends who met there on Facebook and Skype. If there was not the Internet, it would be hard to keep contact with them for years.

    I am not saying that the influences of computers are no trouble at all. Most people experience the negative effects on their health by using computers too much. People who use computers too much time will be bad optics. In addition, people tend to be lack of exercise. However, I think that problems can be so solved that they manage the time they use.

    Now let me conclude. Although some people think that computers have negative effects on our life, others think that it is convenient and makes our life comfortable. First, people can make their tasks easier and quickly with the help of computers. On top of that, the Internet provides opportunities to communicate with friends and family, even though you have a long distance from them. For the above reasons, I am finally convinced that computers make our life easier.

    Thank you for reading my essay. My writing skill is poor. I hope someone help me out.

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    February 22, 2014
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    私の午後 今日の午後、私は親戚の家に行く遊ぶ、とてもれぃ:)
    February 22, 2014
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