Computers is are good or bad?

This essay is for the TOEFL ibt test.

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Thanks to the development of advanced technology, our life has become much more convenient. They We use computers at work, school, home and so forth. Now that computers have a great impact on our life, society will not work function without technology. In this setting, I think that computers have made life easier and more convenient for everybody.

I am a university student in Tokyo, the capital of Japan. Most university students use computers in their studies. In fact, students are supposed to submit reports of lectures on the Web. I think that is very convenient. Students do not need to write by hand and professors also can check their assignments on the computer. They can do their tasks with the help of a computer easily (maybe: "It is much easier for students to do their tasks with the help of a computer")

Furthermore, through the Internet, people can keep contact with their friends and friends, even the distance is if they live far away. Actually In fact, when I was a high school student, I visited Australia to as a homestay student. It has passed been almost three years since I went to there, yet I still keep in contact with the friends who met there on I made there through Facebook and Skype. If there was no the Internet, it would be hard to keep in contact with them for years.

I am not saying that the influences of computers are no trouble at all all positive. Most people experience the negative effects on their health by using computers too much. People For example, who use computers too much time will be bad optics may damage their eyesight. In addition, people tend to be lack of exercise (Maybe: "In addition, people tend not to exercise enough). However, I think that these problems can be so solved that if they people manage the time they use. amount of time they spend in front of a computer.

Now let me conclude. Although some people think that computers have negative effects on our life, others think that it is convenient and makes our life comfortable. First Indeed, people can make their tasks easier and quickly quicker with the help of computers. On top of that, the Internet provides opportunities to communicate with friends and family, even though you have a live a long distance away from them. For the above reasons, I am finally convinced that computers make our life easier.

Thank you for reading my essay. My writing skill is poor. I hope someone can help me out.

Well done :) You write very well.

Computers is good or bad?

This essay is for the TOEFL ibt test.

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Thanks to the development of advanced technology, our life has become  more convenient. They use computers at work, school, home and so forth. Now that computers have a great influence on our life, people will not work without computer. In this setting, I think that computers have made life easier and more convenient for everybody.

I am a university student in Tokyo, the capital of Japan. Most university students use computers in their studies. In fact, students are supposed to submit reports of lectures on the Web. I think that is very convenient. Students do not need to write by hand and professors also can check their assignment on the computer. They can do their tasks with the help of a computer easily.

Furthermore, though the Internet, people can keep contact with their friends and friends, even the distance is far away. Actually, when I was a high school student, I visited Australia - home . It has passed almost three years since I went to there. Yet I still keep contact with friends who met there on Facebook and Skype. If there was not the Internet, it would be hard to keep contact with them for years.

I am not saying that the influences of computers are no trouble at all. Most people experience the negative effects on their health by using computers too much. People who use computers too much time will be bad optics. In addition, people tend to be lack of exercise. However, I think that problems can be so solved that they manage the time they use.

Now let me conclude. Although some people think that computers have negative effects on our life, others think that it is convenient and makes our life comfortable. First, people can make their tasks easier and quickly with the help of computers. On top of that, the Internet provides opportunities to communicate with friends and family, even though you have a long distance from them. For the above reasons, I am finally convinced that computers make our life easier.

Thank you for reading my essay. My writing skill is poor. I hope someone help me out.