Can you correct my paragraph, please ? I wrote a paragraph about the topic "The ideal place to travel on holiday" but it's really not good, i want to write comfortable, don't like to a robot (my english is bad, i hope you can understand). Nha Trang is one of the most beautiful places of Vietnam. Beaches with fine and clean sand and the clear ocean water with mild temperatures all year round. There are several resorts and amusement and water parks, both in the city and on islands off the coast. There, i can be able to eat delicious seafood such as octopus, shrimp, crab. I can enjoy parasailing, scuba diving, water sports and other sporting activities. In the morning, i can watch the sunrise, glance at the waves as i walk along the coast, it’s more beautiful than weekday, that’s for sure. Nha Trang is really ideal place for my holiday.

Our organization chart Hello, everyone. Today, i'll introduce our organization chart to you. Our company is divided into: Human resources, Finance and Marketing departments. The Human resources is the simplest. It involves 2 sections. One is responsible for recruiting, the other is in charge of training. The Finance consist of 2 sections: Financial management and Accounting. Financial management is in charge of fund control and capital requirements. The last department is Marketing. It is composed of 3 sections: Sales, Advertising and Public relations. One is responsible for selling and forecasting the campany sales. Another is responsible for designing and advertising website. The other is in charge of providing support for customer service, talking to customers and speaking to journalists. Thanks for your watching !!!

Can you express my question, please ? I have a question, i don't understand..... "I am going to go home tomorrow" and "I am going home tomorrow". "You are going to go to school next week" and "You are going to school next week" How are they difference ??

Just kidding !!! My sister: What are you doing ??? Me: I'm talking a little break My sister: You look bored, play card with me, ok? Me: Sorry, i just want to sleep now My sister: Are you hungry ? Would you like some butter and bread ?? Me: No, thanks, i'm full My sister: Do you like insects ? Me: Yes, a little bit My sister: What kind of insect do you like ? Me: Sorry, can you give me your box of butter, please ? My sister: Sure. What do you want to do ? I threw out the windows My sister: What's up ? Me: I like butterflies, ok? Then, my sister cried and i was fined by my mom.........i hate it......

My vacation If my sentences are wrong, can you help me correct them, please ? I will go summer vacation in Nha Trang beach. In here, i can eat delicious seafood such as: octopus, shrimp, crab,....i will play: parasailing and surfing, it's very wonderful, for sure. In the morning, i saw sunrise, waves and walking along the coast. I built sand castles, sunbathe and swim on the ocean. Incredible, in the afternoon, sunset is more beautiful than weekday !!! my summer vacation just about 2 days but it's a awesome time, I'm really funny. If you have opportunity, you should come to Nha Trang beach, in VietNam. You will really satisfied when you are here, that's for sure. Thanks for your valuable feedbacks

learning english I have already learnt English about 8 years. But my skills still bad, i watch video, listen to music, read english conversations every day. Today, i made friend with a person in the US, she tell me that "you are polite", i can understand her talk but i can't answer like a native person. I hope you can help me, i can help you learn Vietnamese (of course, if you want ), if you can speak Vietnamese which will convenience.... ^ ^