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Can you correct my paragraph, please ? According to me, health is more important than wealth. Health is the necessary condition. That mean you can’t get what you want unless you are healthy. On the other hand we can’t buy health with money. Today, there are still some diseases which have no cure. Wealth doesn’t always make life more healthy and happily. However, many young people spent almost all their time to earn as much money as possible. They don’t care about themselves because they think money can keep them healthy. This is completely erroneous. Anyway, we still need health and wealth, in order to live happily.

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