Can you correct my paragraph, please ? I wrote a paragraph about the topic "The ideal place to travel on holiday" but it's really not good, i want to write comfortable, don't like to a robot (my english is bad, i hope you can understand). Nha Trang is one of the most beautiful places of Vietnam. Beaches with fine and clean sand and the clear ocean water with mild temperatures all year round. There are several resorts and amusement and water parks, both in the city and on islands off the coast. There, i can be able to eat delicious seafood such as octopus, shrimp, crab. I can enjoy parasailing, scuba diving, water sports and other sporting activities. In the morning, i can watch the sunrise, glance at the waves as i walk along the coast, it’s more beautiful than weekday, that’s for sure. Nha Trang is really ideal place for my holiday.