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please help!! I need any help again!!
I am studying for my IELTS exam. Please help me to correct the next writing, is a letter and one essay.
LETTER
Case:
You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
letter:
Dear Mr. Jones,
My name is Carolina Moreno. i I am a student of at CS college.
I live in a room of college dorm room with another student. It has been a great experience, but now we have many problems because the arrangement is very uncomfotrtable uncomfortable, and it is very difficult to work hour here.
I want to ask you if is possible to obtain other a different acommodation kind,. I would prefer a single acommodatikon accomodation. It would be a is better more productive place to work, and I would be more comforatble. comfortability and the space terms.
I would appreciate hearing from you soon.
Kind Regards,
Carolina Moreno
Essay:
Case: it is believed that young people have too much freedom and they don´t pay attentiom to the older people´s advice.
Essay:
Currently, the people criticize the young people without any for no reason or all reason. From In my opinion, never has it been so important to think determine why now they there are problematic people in all social levels.
When it comes to young people a young person's behavior, it isn´t is not a condition without explication explanation. I think that your A person's behavior is a result of the familiar formation received.
Now as far as I am concerned, disobedient young people disobedient can come of from a problematic family or [maybe haven´t family and this is the explication. <em>] need to revise this, but I'm not sure what you are trying to say</em>
Sometimes a young person's radical behavior too can is only a cry out for attention need and feel them love. so they just need to be shown love.
To sum up, I think that the a young person's disobedience isn´t "freedom" consequence only, but too is consequence the result of his/her emotional life and the environment he/she grew up in. seneral growth context, knowing that their Families are fundamental in character formation and behavior. With their families' influence, young people can learn the correct way.0 votedJanuary 8, 20140Slowly but steadily
I'm so happy that so many people correct my posts. There are very helpful. I used to feel that I didn't want to write in English because there must be a lot of mistakes, but now I've become to think that I should write something even if there are a lot of mistakes.
I don't understand or speak fluent English, but my mother was able to understand it. In addition, she understood German. She was also very diligent, curious, and [intelligent] had intelligence. She was always reading the books and was listening [listened] <em>**Try not to write in passive voice (was reading; was listening)</em> to foreign language practicing program[s] on [the] radio every day. Somehow, I didn't receive her intelligence gene.
We didn't had [have] the internet until late, so she didn't use the internet that much. If she find [could have found] this kind of language exchange site, I'm sure she would be happy to study with every day.
Compared to her, I'm not a diligent person, and [I] have less intelligent [intelligence], but I'll try to write in English [every day] which [even though] I'm not very good at [it] every day... slowly but steadily.(Another common phrase: "Slowly but surely.")Ayano,
You are doing such a great job. I am sure your mother would be very proud of you for continuing to write in English even if "there are a lot of mistakes."
I enjoyed reading about you and her - she sounds like she was a strong, ambitious woman!
0 votedJanuary 8, 20141Vacations
Hey there! I've not been here since [in quite a while] a lot ago. Now I return in order to write something and [to] continue practicing my English. Do you know why am I studying this [language] lenguage? It's because I do love learning and expressing my ideas; now you know! :)
This vacations I was sick, too bad [sick] to be honest. I have to continue with my classes the next Monday, and it seems as if I [have not rested] hadn't rest. But that's not the worst thing. mi My father was fired from his job the last Thursday. He used to work for the city goverment, but there's [there was] a change of administration, so [he was let go] his work has ended. Despite of [all] that we're still positive about <em>[everything]</em>. I want to get a [language] exchange, and [because] this is my year to improve as much as a I can if I want to do it. It's my time!
Nice to write again! Good wishes for all of you, and happy new year.Great job, James!
I'm sorry you were sick on vacation, and I'm sorry about your father's job loss. Sending positive thoughts your way!
0 votedJanuary 8, 20141Without any topic to talk about
Hi there! Actually I wanted to write something, but I didn't know what write about, so I decided to talk about having nothing to say.
I have already written a few texts, and, [as] always, I take ages to get an idea. In fact, what I want is only anyone [someone] to correct this short text and, if find necessary, give me some advice about learning English.
Well, I think that's it. Thanks in advance!Great job!
0 votedJanuary 8, 20140- Quiero dormir.... Hoy no es mi día. Soy muy cansado porque no duermo anoche. Enseñe todo día y tengo que trabajar más porque mis estudiantes grados se deben... Pero soy feliz porque la muestra de español a mi escuela enséñeme el pretérito. Puedo hablar acerca de en el tiempo pasado. Ahora, tengo que aprender más vocabularios. También, muchas personas simpáticas quieren ayudarme. Escribo lento porque tengo que usar el diccionario.January 8, 2014140
friendship - how it works?
They have [were] drunk, and were repeadetly in ridiculous situations. <em>(Drunk is state of being - you cannot have it, only be it.)</em>
They reinvented themselves over and over, without take care caring about bothering or hurting someone around them. [They were] trying to become someone else....
Instead, some weekends they meeting and remember those all [all those] mistakes which makes [made them] what they become [are] today...
This remembers [These memories are] it's what will keep them together, even though [through] marriage, kids, dismissals... [dismissals? do you mean turmoil? fights?]<em>This is almost poetic. I really liked it.</em>
0 votedJanuary 7, 20141
