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Colombia flagMichelle R.
friendship - how it works? They have drunk, and were repeadetly in ridiculous situations. They reinvented themselves over and over, without take care about bothering or hurting someone arround them, trying to become someone else.... Instead, some weekends they meeting and remember those all mistakes which makes what they become today... This remembers it's what will keep them together, even though marriage, kids, dismissals, ...

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friendship - how it works?

They have [were] drunk, and were repeadetly in ridiculous situations. (Drunk is state of being - you cannot have it, only be it.)

They reinvented themselves over and over, without take care caring about bothering or hurting someone around them. [They were] trying to become someone else.... 

Instead, some weekends they meeting and remember those all [all those] mistakes which makes [made them] what they become [are] today...

This remembers [These memories are] it's what will keep them together, even though [through] marriage, kids, dismissals... [dismissals? do you mean turmoil? fights?]

 

This is almost poetic. I really liked it. 

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