Day off

Today could have been a nice day. I was getting spending some some time with my family, however It started being becoming windy and cloudy. Anyway, being off it´s is better than being at work!
Please fell feel free to correct!

Feeling lazy

Much to my relief, exams is are over <em>(if you're talking about only one exam, you could say: "...my exam is over)</em>. I've never been so tired after the exams (<em>or if you're talking about only ONE exam you should say: "I've never been so tired after AN axam)</em>. One more year before I graduate, and this will be my last student summer holiday.
At present, I'm staying in my room, listening to Avicii's "summer anthem", "Wake me up" and having some mangosteens. This seems to be perfect for a lazy, stress-free day. I haven't got the faintest idea where I will go, or what I will do during this "last" summer.

Great job, Luong!! You are writing English wonderfully!! Keep up the good work! 

Children on in the swimming pool!

Mothers and fathers should have be careful with their children when they are in a swimming pool. I have read about a lot of cases in which a child is found dead in the water because his parents aren't weren't seeing to watching him. Parents usually are busy talking with some friends and forget that their child is on in the swimming pool. I think that parents should worry for about that and to sign their children to up for swimming classes. I hope I don´t read it anymore about these cases of dead children.

Great job with your writing, Fran!! I found just a few small errors. Keep working on your English, you're doing great! It seems you are very passionate about your essay subject. You did a good job expressing that!

Sunday Night

I can say this weekend was great. Although I haven't didn't really gone go out with my friends, I went to my grandma's and talked to her during the whole Saturday afternoon and evening and during the Sunday afternoon too.
She has great stories about when she was younger and I've realized that she likes it when there is someone there to listen to her stories. I hope that next year, when I travel to iniciate my graduation, my cousins keep on doing that. I mean, keep on going to her house to listen to her stories and make her happy.

* Very good job expressing your feelings and thoughts in English!! Keep it up!!!

An honest confession

I believe that there is no more honest confession than a tear...

It's a point when all your inner being is full and you can't contain something anything else, and it overflows...
It might be the reason why the cowards hate to cry.
Is there someone more vulnerable than someone crying?
It is not easy to find someone to be with you while you are crying, because he or she will see you naked, unarmored, vulnerable...

All those all stuffs things that we are jealously saving, sudenly overflows.

<em>* Great job!! Your thoughts are very well expressed here in English!! Keep up the good work!!</em>

Package holiday

Today I will speak about a package tour <em>holiday</em> <em>(<-- instead of holiday, maybe you should say "vacation"?)</em>. There are some advantages and disadvantages. First , I think that a package tour <em>holiday</em> can help you have a pefect trip. You don't need to worrying to about finding some famous places and or some local cuisine. Both of them have are included in your package tour. In a package tour you are also prepared receive all the tickets to enter some famous places. In addition, you will have a guide who always comes with you and gives introduce introductions about history as well as features of where you go. You will also have a insurance to pay for all your any accidents in during your trip. Furthermore, you are not don't need to worry about different languages. A guide and a translator will help you. Secondly, I want to speak about some disadvantages. When you choose a package tour, you will spend a lot of money. It depends on your demandtion destination. You will also lose your freedom because of some rules which the company will give you. You can't freely discover things by yourself. You can't go to the hotel later. You can't do everything completely follow your mind. However, you can see that there are more benefits than disavantages to go to travel by a package tour. We should try on it once!

Festival in my country

My country has many festivals such as New Year's eve, Christmas, Midtumn. But I want to speak about a more special festival. It is Mother's Day, organized on the second Sunday in May. This day has original originated from in the US and now enlarge has spread around the world. I think this day is a meaningful day because it reminds us to remember our mothers . Everyday we are busy with our work without thinking about our mothers' sacrifice for us. Until Only when having difficulties in our lives, we will will we ask mother to help us. Mother who born birthed us, teach taught us the way to make be a good person, always sacrifices for us. The aim of this day is creating an opportunity for us to say "thanks" to our mothers. We can give mother a bunch of flowers which mother that she likes--a small gift but it is very meaningful gift. Or more simply, we can help mother do the housework and have a warm dinner with our family. We should do everything to make our mother happier. Conclusion: I think this day is a meaningful event.

Very nice words!! You're doing excellent with expressing your thoughts in written English!! :)

Children educational tips

A child is influenced by everything around them. What a child watches around will influence not only his understanding of the world understanding but also his selfesteem, perception, and action on in the world in his future. All children’s impressions will become a base which later, as a teenager, he will able to lean in on his to make judgments later.
Any information which that we see around we can try to describe with words. And those words our child will use later. But there is a much more effective way to teach your child – use a game! I t It does not matter what type of game it gonna be is. It has been proved proven that using a game-like source of knowledge is 3 times more effective than not using them at all.

Great ideas!! Keep up the good work! You're doing great with written English! :)