Children on the swimming pool!
Mothers and fathers should have careful with their children when they are in a swimming pool. I have read a lot cases in which a child is found dead in the water because his parents aren't seeing to him. Parents usually are busy talking with some friends and forget that their child is on the swimming pool. I think that parents should worry for that and to sign their children to swimming class. I hope don´t read it more about these cases of dead.
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Children on in the swimming pool!
Mothers and fathers should have be careful with their children when they are in a swimming pool. I have read about a lot of cases in which a child is found dead in the water because his parents aren't weren't seeing to watching him. Parents usually are busy talking with some friends and forget that their child is on in the swimming pool. I think that parents should worry for about that and to sign their children to up for swimming classes. I hope I don´t read it anymore about these cases of dead children.
Great job with your writing, Fran!! I found just a few small errors. Keep working on your English, you're doing great! It seems you are very passionate about your essay subject. You did a good job expressing that!
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Yeah... Its horrible
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