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Festival in my country My country has many festivals such as new year eve ,christmas, midtumn .but i want to speak about a more special festival. It is mother's day organized on the second sunday in May. This day has original from the US and now enlarge around the world. I think this day is a meaning day because it reminds us to remember our mother . Everyday, we are busy with our work without thinking about mother's sacrifice for us. Until having difficulties in our life , we will ask mother to help us. Mother who born us, teach us the way to make a good person always sacrifice for us. The aim of this day is creating a opportunity for us to say "thank" to our mother. We can give mother a bunch of flowers which mother like , a small gift but it is very meaning. Simply, we can help mother do the housework and have a warm dinner with our family. We should do everything to make our mother happier. Conclusion, i think this day is a meaning event.

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Festival in my country

My country has many festivals such as New Year's eve, Christmas, Midtumn. But I want to speak about a more special festival. It is Mother's Day, organized on the second Sunday in May. This day has original originated from in the US and now enlarge has spread around the world. I think this day is a meaningful day because it reminds us to remember our mothers . Everyday we are busy with our work without thinking about our mothers' sacrifice for us. Until Only when having difficulties in our lives, we will will we ask mother to help us. Mother who born birthed us, teach taught us the way to make be a good person, always sacrifices for us. The aim of this day is creating an opportunity for us to say "thanks" to our mothers. We can give mother a bunch of flowers which mother that she likes--a small gift but it is very meaningful gift. Or more simply, we can help mother do the housework and have a warm dinner with our family. We should do everything to make our mother happier. Conclusion: I think this day is a meaningful event.

 

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