wo xiazn zai zai kunming

Kunming shi yi ge hen you yi si de difang. JIin tian de tiangi hen hao.. shei xiang gen wo yiqi chi yuunan wan fan?

 

我现在在昆明

昆明是一个很有意思的地方。

今天的天气很好..谁想跟我一起吃晚饭？

 

PS.  Shei (who/ 谁) is exact. A lot of Chinese people don't know its exact pronunciation is Shei in Mandarian. In dictionary it's Shui, but we don't say it as Shui. Hope my answer is helpful for you.

我朋友要结婚了

我最好的朋友今天晚上给我报喜说她明年五月份结婚。我真是太高兴了！

露宿在旷野

在巴黎散步

今天，下中文课以后，我跟一个同学去丈量巴黎的街道，走到脚疼。

 

这样更简洁些吧

It should be "doesn't sb. do..." I think, because "not" is always following behind the auxiliary verb, to form a negation, and it makes the negative tone more intense like this. 我想应该是“doesn't sb. do...”, 因为 not 始终是紧跟在助动词后面，以构成否定式，而且这样会显得否定的语气更强烈。

I don't think Hongkong, Taiwan or Singapore is the best choice to learn the stantard mardarin. Their mardarin are weird. In fact the great mass of cities in the North China are good choices, such as Beijing, Jinan and Zhengzhou. Although they speak with some local accent. You know any dialect can't be representative of the mardarin. But Beijing and Shanghai are still preferred. Beacause almost all the young people speak stantard mardarin. Beijing and Shanghai are both the most international and the best cities. There are a plenty of people can speak English or the others foreign language.

Anytime to say " Gong Xi Fa Cai!" is not too early. ;) 任何时候说“恭喜发财”都不会太早啊，我就时常跟朋友们说。

基本上这翻译无误，只是有一点点小语法问题。 我试着翻译了一下： “这些药物的副作用令人无法忍受，而且越来越严重。 我想他开的是类固醇(激素类药物)。 我需要联系医生，看是否能减少剂量。”