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    I love Vietnamese

    Thời gian này vui thật à nha , mình toàn gặp những người kì lạ , có suy nghĩ thật khác người , hành động , tính cách , thói quen của họ thật đặc biệt .Nói chuyện với họ mình thấy rất tò mò và phấn khích . Tại sao họ lại hấp dẫn mình vậy , mình thật sự thấy hào hứng khi tìm hiểu về con người họ , về nguồn gốc sự khác biệt ở họ , vì về gốc gác , gia cảnh , hay vì về gì đó , tại sao họ lại tự tin khi vẫn sống tách rời với xã hội này .Có thể nói mình rất khâm phục họ .Thật đấy . Cũng tự nhiên mình thấy thầm cười chính bản thân mình . Đôi khi để khỏi lạc lõng giữa đám đông , để hòa mình với tập thể , mình đã không nói ra những suy nghĩ thật của mình , một phần vì bản thân chưa đủ tầm để bộc bạch ra những suy nghĩ đó , một phần vì mình không đủ dũng cảm để đối đầu với những châm chích , xách mé và sự xa lánh của người khác .Để rồi mình đại đồng , mình ba phải , mình tán đồng theo người ta một cách sao rỗng .Ôi , buồn thay !

    <em>Bạn viết như người bản xứ vậy. Thật là giỏi.</em>

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    November 13, 2013
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    Love can be breathtaking.

    I am telling here, because I still hesitate in telling to tell this to the one who should hear would like listen to it. Feelings and emotions never were focused by my thoughts. I even can't put all I´m living in words.
    Being in love with someone is strange because it didn´t happen to me like in movies. I don´t feel a constant euphory, I´m not behaving like as if I was been taken and dragged to another dimension, I didn´t change my habits, expect now I'm spending my free time talking.
    I don´t think everything is perfect, I don´t think she is perfect, and I first knew her flaws.
    But I feel peace, happiness, calmness, and I sleep better.
    It´s good having someone who hear listen to and support me, first as a friend, now as a life partner.
    Sometimes I feel like I was dreaming... and it is like those cliche stories, I know, and I´m afraid this peaceful life ends somehow.
    Everytime I think about what I´m living I really lose my breath, I stop breathing, as I wonder and consider this story.
    I met(knew?) her online, and after talking during some weeks we met in real life.
    Well, I´m ending this narration here. Let me know what is not clear or if there is some misused word.
    Thanks in advance.

     

    <em>I'm not a native English speaker. From my point of view, you no need to use complex words. Let's use clear and sipmle words to tranfer your ideas. Besides, you should focus on punctuation. Don't use so many commas instead of dots.</em>

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    November 13, 2013
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    Human trafficking in Vietnam: Parents rescued children As many other developing countries in the world, Vietnam is demonstrating efforts to combat human trafficking. A lot of women and children are kidnapped or cheated and then trafficked for commercial sexual exploitation. Many are rescued by the gorvement to come back their daily lives. Some are rescued by tireless efforts of their families. However, no less than these luckily rescued are the ones being sex labors in distant places. If you pay much attention to this issue, you can know some cases that parents look for their trafficked daughters restlessly thourgh newspapers, televisions or oral storytelling. It took them 5 years, 10 years and even longer to find out their small daughers. Most of these parents are poor farmers living in rural areas with little knowledge or facilites. Thus, their rescue stories are unimaginable and extraodinary. Of course, such a small number are lucky enough to enjoy happiness to reunite with their girls. I remembered one story told by my mother about a trafficked girl and her father’s rescue. For me, it’s unbelievable story when that girl lives in city center but deceived by traffickers. Because most of trafficked girls live in rural and poor areas. When that girl was brought away, her father tried to follow the trace and found her at a place 200 km far from her house. She’s a lucky girl when her father found out her just before the traffickers were going to sell her to China. Her father, a smart and brave man, even assigned the female trafficker to the ward police department.. However, one policeman rided this woman after receiving money from her. Such a despicable policeman! However, once again, the father found out this woman and assigned directly to city police. The human trafficking is getting complex and insidious. It’s vital that nations, organizations and each persons cooperate to combat the traffickers around the world.
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    Focus on small things which I can change

    How to be a positive man? Eva said:" Focus on small things which you can change....Don't fell bad about things which you can't change...To enjoy and celebrate every moment of life." Totally, Focus on small things is the best way to be more positive.
    Get away from nagtive negative people.
    Make friends with simply and happy persons.
    Listen to positive and happy music.
    Read light and clean film books or film.
    Do things having fun unreasonale. unreasonably

     

    Such helpful tips!

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    November 6, 2013
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    How I wasted my time at college Student time is one of the most beautiful periods of one’s lifetime. If I had a wish now, I would come back my student time. If I were a student, I would use my free time more effectively, especially in English and Chinese languages. In period of studying at university, Chinese was one of my important subjects. I myself chose Chinese for the love of Chinese songs. However I abandoned Chinese quickly to focused on English in order to apply for a job after graduation. In my country, English is the basic requirement to get a good job. And if you can speak one more foreign language, you may have various choices in working. But I did not believe that I could do well on both languages while I was a time millionaire. I used my free time for many other useless activities. I felt so ashamed and regretful. My English skill now is only at upper-intermediate level, far beyond my expectation. My Chinese is even worse. I can remember speaking some simple conversations and nothing else. Despite that, nothing is too late. I will try my best to sharpen both English and Chinese skills. I will grasp bigger choices in near future.
    November 6, 2013
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    entries

    Sometimes, I want to write but I dont know what I will to write. I tried to find the subject out which I have feeling in to write. Then, I found nothing ^^
    Thỉnh thoảng, tôi muốn viết nhưng tôi không biết tôi sẽ viết cái gì. Tôi đã cố gắng tìm ra một chủ đề tôi có hứng thú để viết. Sau đó, tôi đã không tìm ra gì cả ^^

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    November 5, 2013
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    My career In order to hep my country

    Colombia is the most beautiful country around in the world,. There's no other country with such variety of animals, plants, people and cultures in the same place as Colombia, . but Unfortunately, it is the most unequal country in America, a real shame. In the other hand Besides the point, I'm studying industrial engineering and apparently there's no relation one topic with another, but i don't think so, I believe my career is perfect in order to get better reduce the situation of poverty, misery and inequality in Colombia. For those that doesn't know about industrial engineering, this profesion is everything about analysis and management, of course in the enterprise context, but for me, In my opinion, a country is similar to a company. Maybe it sounds frivolous, but there are similarities; i.e. the different areas in an organization and the different economies in a country like energy, agriculture and so on. But overall, the most important similarity is the people. into An organization the people working in must have a culture, values and principles in the same order as the company does, i think, a country works the same and is in this topic where colombia has mayor problems. So i'd like focuss my profesion in on this. I feel exciting excited and happy justthinking about it and makes me happy.

     

    Hope my correction helpful to you.

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    November 5, 2013
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