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My career In order to hep my country Colombia is the most beautiful country around the world, there's no other country with such variety of animals, plants, people and cultures in the same place as Colombia, but unfortunately is the most unequal country in America, a real shame. In the other hand, I'm studying industrial engineering and apparently there's no relation one topic with another, but i don't think so, I believe my career is perfect in order to get better the situation of poberty, misery and inequality in Colombia. For those that doesn't know about industrial engineering this profesion is everything about analysis and management, of course in the enterprise context, but for me, a country is similar to a company maybe it sounds frivolous, but there are similarities; i.e. the different areas in an organization and the different economies in a country like energy, agriculture and so on. But overall, the most important similarity is the people. into an organization the people working in must have a culture, values and principles in the same order the company does, i think, a country works the same and is in this topic where colombia has mayor problems. So i'd like focuss my profesion in this. I feel exciting just thinking about it and makes me happy.

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My career In order to hep my country

Colombia is the most beautiful country around in the world,. There's no other country with such variety of animals, plants, people and cultures in the same place as Colombia, . but Unfortunately, it is the most unequal country in America, a real shame. In the other hand Besides the point, I'm studying industrial engineering and apparently there's no relation one topic with another, but i don't think so, I believe my career is perfect in order to get better reduce the situation of poverty, misery and inequality in Colombia. For those that doesn't know about industrial engineering, this profesion is everything about analysis and management, of course in the enterprise context, but for me, In my opinion, a country is similar to a company. Maybe it sounds frivolous, but there are similarities; i.e. the different areas in an organization and the different economies in a country like energy, agriculture and so on. But overall, the most important similarity is the people. into An organization the people working in must have a culture, values and principles in the same order as the company does, i think, a country works the same and is in this topic where colombia has mayor problems. So i'd like focuss my profesion in on this. I feel exciting excited and happy justthinking about it and makes me happy.

 

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