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Love can be breathtaking. I am telling here, because I still hesitate in telling this to the one who should hear it. Feelings and emotions never were focused by my thoughts. I even can't put all I´m living in words. Being in love with someone is strange because it didn´t happen to me like in movies. I don´t feel a constant euphory, I´m not behaving like if I was been taken and dragged to another dimension, I didn´t change my habits, expect now I spend my free time talking. I don´t think everything is perfect, I don´t think she is perfect, and I first knew her flaws. But I feel peace, happiness, calmness, and I sleep better. It´s good having someone who hear and support me, first as a friend, now as a life partner. Sometimes I feel like I was dreaming... and it is like those cliche stories, I know, and I´m afraid this peaceful life ends somehow. Everytime I think about what I´m living I really lose my breath, I stop breathing, as I wonder and consider this story. I met(knew?) her online, and after talking during some weeks we met in real life. Well, I´m ending this narration here. Let me know what is not clear or if there is some misused word. Thanks in advance.

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Love can be breathtaking.

I am telling here, because I still hesitate in telling to tell this to the one who should hear would like listen to it. Feelings and emotions never were focused by my thoughts. I even can't put all I´m living in words.
Being in love with someone is strange because it didn´t happen to me like in movies. I don´t feel a constant euphory, I´m not behaving like as if I was been taken and dragged to another dimension, I didn´t change my habits, expect now I'm spending my free time talking.
I don´t think everything is perfect, I don´t think she is perfect, and I first knew her flaws.
But I feel peace, happiness, calmness, and I sleep better.
It´s good having someone who hear listen to and support me, first as a friend, now as a life partner.
Sometimes I feel like I was dreaming... and it is like those cliche stories, I know, and I´m afraid this peaceful life ends somehow.
Everytime I think about what I´m living I really lose my breath, I stop breathing, as I wonder and consider this story.
I met(knew?) her online, and after talking during some weeks we met in real life.
Well, I´m ending this narration here. Let me know what is not clear or if there is some misused word.
Thanks in advance.

 

I'm not a native English speaker. From my point of view, you no need to use complex words. Let's use clear and sipmle words to tranfer your ideas. Besides, you should focus on punctuation. Don't use so many commas instead of dots.

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I still didn´t take English classes, by the way.
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I´m not a native speaker, but I didn´t find flaws, only ideas that would be better been expressed with another words.

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