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怎么选一个大学?
怎么选一个大学? 在美国,学生有选择很多(选择)。这个星期六,奥巴马总统说他的女儿(将)会去哈佛。 不过,先她(首先)会有一个空荡(间隔)年。奥巴马总统说她(对她说),不选一个大学只有好名字(选大学不能只看名气)。不过我觉得她很幸运, 因为她想必有多好好多录取通知书。她的家也有钱,她有好教育(她接受过良好的教育),在那儿会去(无论去哪儿),(都)没什么问题。有的学生(则)比较不幸运。他们的父母没有钱,所以虽然(就算)一个(这个)学生可以去(考上)哈佛,而且他们(也)不能去。有的时候学生可以收到奖学金, 可是也不是一个肯定的事。基本上大意还是表达的很清楚呢!
1.平时的话,建议再多注意下逻辑词汇的固定搭配,
比如“无论......都......”;“虽然.......但是......”;“就算/即使......也......”
所以虽然(就算)一个(这个)学生可以去(考上)哈佛,而且他们(也)不能去。
这句话如果说成:【虽然】这个学生可以考上哈佛,【但是】他也不能去。
口语中有的人可能也这么说,但是严格来讲还是【就算/即使......也......】更为合适。
2.不选一个大学只有好名字(选大学不能只看名气is better than不能因为这所大学有一个好名气就选is better than不能选这所大学只因为它有好名气)
can‘t choose a university only for its name. 翻译成中文语序是这样的:choose university can't only for its name.
3.“看“这个字含义很丰富。有的时候可以当成“因为”用。或者引申为“考虑”用。
You can't marry someone just because he/she is rich.=你不能看一个人有钱就结婚。
You can't marry someone only for his/her money.=你不能看一个人有钱就结婚。
上面的两个句子逻辑上延伸就有了下文,也就有了最终建议的翻译。
You can't marry someone just giving the consideration of his/her money=结婚不能只看钱。
0 votedMay 3, 20160- The last part of the cover letter. Thank you guys so much!>3< Given my academic interests, I am going to take curriculum of International such as Ethics and Public Policy in Global Perspective; comparative Economies: US & China-US economic comparison; also some of International politics, such as politics of rural and other related courses. By learning these courses, I believe I can get a more open vision and pliable mind towards the problem I am interested in. I always want to work for a NGO or consulting firm, and to do that, it is essential for me to have a comprehensive understanding of how the national economy as well as its social policies work. I know here we have a lot of outstanding graduates, many of these seniors have become the leader of several fields, and I hope to have the opportunity to interact more with them to prepare for my own future, and to find the career I really want after graduate.May 3, 201601
- again the cover letter (may be a little bit long) I have a great interest in economic development and poverty, as well as social policy issues. I am a student majored social security, but I found the existing social security policies are allowing vulnerable groups unprotected before a lot of severe risks. There are many families in China impoverished because of illness, and many elderly people living a solitary life. Especially last winter, I had the opportunity to deep into rural areas of Jiangxi province with my mentor. I saw a lot of left-behind children study in their dilapidated classrooms, and their home with the same poor living conditions. I wonder why there are a few people enjoying the extremely rich life while other large of the population live in such poverty and cannot extricate themselves? What will other countries do when facing with similar problems, such as the United States? What kind reform is needed to both boom the economic development, and also social equality?May 3, 201601
- I'm trying to write a cover letter...... Might you guys kindly spare some time to help me correct and polish it? Thank you !!! xxx is an international educational institution, which not only has a very rich teaching resources, but also a number of well-known academics teachers and top students from around the world. I always dreamed of studing at a place like this. At the mean time, I can make friendship with those have different cultural backgrounds. Furthermore I believe that with one year study here, I will have a more comprehensive and profound understanding of the future world.April 30, 201620
看病对话总结
有一天高文中因为他的(觉得)肚子疼, 于是就去看医生了。 为什么他的肚子疼呢?这是因为他吃了坏了的蛋糕。他吃了上个星期的蛋糕。 医生问他他发不发烧(better)。, 然后他告诉让高文中他躺下,就开始检查了。 高文中文问医生他(who is this 他?--高文中 “要”means“需要”)要不要打针。 医生说不用。 然后医生给他开了一些药,告诉他一天吃三次每次要吃两片药。 因为高文中听不懂医生说的是什么,所以(/于是)他请医生他再又说了一遍。 高文中也还问医生药应该是饭前还是饭后吃那种药。,医生说都可以。他也还建议高文中他最好二十四个小时不吃饭。 高文中觉得这个办法很不好不是很好。
紫色是不要了的,蓝色是修改或者添加了的
其实写的蛮好的,改的稍稍碎了一点不好意思~
主要要注意下人称代词“他”的使用呢~然后就是虽然理解想表达逻辑关系的意图,但是不必每个都用“因为,所以”的句式来说明,也有其他自然的承接关系可供使用。这个可以平常多积累积累~
还有“也”“又”“还”的用法要注意一下,
加油!:)
0 votedNovember 27, 20131- 自由講演の下書きです,ちょっと長いかも,すみません。。。 私の友達 私はいろんな友達がいます。年上の友達と年下の友達、ネットでの友達と生活中の友達、学校の友達と校外の友達、上司の友達と同僚の友達などさまざまがいます。皆さんは私の友達でもあり、先生でもある。私と一緒に笑うこともあり、共に成長することもある。 そんないるんな友達のなかで、すごく素敵な人たちがいます。それは私とここで日本語を勉強するために出会った皆さんです。皆さんと私はそれ違う仕事に携わって、すれ違う理想を持って、すれ違う人生を歩んているが、そんな全然(交差?)がない人たちが「日本語をもっと上手に話せたい」という理由でここで集まって、そして親しくお互いに助けることができたのは、ほんとに不思議に感じます。もし「縁」というものがあれば、きっとそういうものに違いないでしょう。皆さんはいつも私の先生のように、いろいろなことを教えられた。 先生もこの中の一員です。先生なのに、親切に明るくでまるで年上の友達みたいです。お掛けさまで、私の日本語もどんどんうまく話せようになりました。先生にお礼を言います。 皆さんとここで出会うことになってよっかたです。僅かな七日だけど、私にとっては最高の七日です。 ありがこうございます! psちょうっと長い気がするが。。。どうもありがとうございます!!!November 22, 201311
