Do entertainers deserve their substantial salaries?

Any feedback would be highly appreciated.

Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
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The amounts that people in the entertainment industry earn have always been a debatable issue. While some assert that entertainers are generally overpaid, I believe that they deserve their earnings and at the same time, I do support higher salaries for public servants.

There are several reasons why I believe that sports stars, world-class actors, and other celebrities deserve their enormous salaries. Firstly, in order to be a top-rated athlete sportsman , one has to undertake years of vigorous training, meaning that rather than having fun like the rest of their peers.  young people Athletes often spend their precious adolescent  youth years developing their talents. Secondly, some of the talents that certain musicians posses are extremely rare, and they receive huge fees because of these unique qualities. For instance, If anyone everyone could sing like Adele, then her earnings would have been considered unreasonable. Finally, to successfully play their role in a movie, actors sometimes endure unbelievably harsh diets that may damage their health. As an example, Brad Anderson, the lead actor in a movie titled: The Machinist, had lost 20 kilograms of his body weight for the role he had in that movie.

Having said that, I also believe that other professions should be paid considerable salaries. People such as health professionals whose jobs benefit every member of the society deserve higher incomes because their actions are vital for maintaining public health. Furthermore, teachers as a group of people who are considered underpaid in many parts of the world should be paid more. I believe that no one can deny a teacher’s fundamental role in the education of young generations and therefore their payments should be compatible with the crucial service that they provide.

In conclusion, while I agree with the huge sums of money that entertainers receive, I certainly support a raise in the salaries of for public servants as well as any other professional whose job results in people’s well being.

Just made a few updates, but well written overall!  Keep up the good work.