El gato de mi vecino

El gato de mi vecino me visita cada día. Se llama Zippy porqué puede correr muy rápidamente. Llega a la hora del desayuno y siempre tiene mucho hambre. Es negro y blanco. Su cuerpo es blanco pero tiene manchas blanco sobre su cara y su patas son blancas. Normalmente, viene del mismo rumbo. Salta en el muro y entonces, salta en la alféizar de la ventana de la cocina y empezó a maullar. No paró hasta consiga un tazón de leche.

Writing an e-mail

TO. Holiday Inn´s Manager
SUBJECT: Lost t-shirt


Dear Sir/ Madam,

My name is Xilea XXX and I was in your Holiday Inn two days ago.

When I returned home, I noticed that I have not my favourite t-shirt was not in my suitcase. I have looked for this it in all of my baggage, but I have not been able to find it.

I think I left it in my room (room 383)... Could you ask Holiday Inn´s staff if they have found it, please? It is a blue t-shirt, without sleeveless and with a superhero´s patternlogo, small size small. Actually, Although it is was not expensive, but it is very important for to me, becouse it is it's my lucky charm. I usually wear it when I need luck for something, for example when I have to take a difficult exam. For this reason, I beg you to try to find it.

If you find it, it I would be grateful if you could send it to my address. Of course, I would will pay for all costs. Thank you for your attention.,

Faithfully,

Xilea XXX
C/ Italki, 99
Zaragoza
Aragón (Spain)

Great job! Good vocabulary & well written. 

My family

I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR HELP, PLEASE BE FEEL FREE TO CORRECT ANY MISTAKES YOU SEE.

My name is Jose, I live in Seville, in Spain. My mother's name is Rocio and my father's name is also Jose. She My mom left stopped working three years ago;, before that, she was a shop assistant in El Corteinglés, a very famous mall here in Spain. She is 63 years old. My father is retired too., hHe had a lot of different jobs, like as a guard in a shopping center, or and as a policeman but maybe the job that defines him the most was maintenance of electrical appliance, he repaired it. He is 67 years old.

I love them both very much., eEvery day, we love to watch a game show that makes asks people funny questions to people and we try to answer themit.

Up until seven years ago, we lived with my older sister too, but now she has her own home with her husband and their two daughters, my nieces, I love them so much... My sister is 32 years old and works as phone operator in a company that sells mineral water to other companies.

Almost every sSaturday we meet at my home for dinner, previously first I play with my nieces and watch movies with them, then my family and me I talk about how the week was.

Great job! Good luck with your English :)

Chicago

Hi, everyone. I am Wendy from China. Since I was 13 years old, I began have been to learning English. But However, now I still can not speak it very well and express what I want to say correctly. I am very sad. Maybe I don't have a language talent. Reciting the words is a painful process for me.
Now I am in Chicago as an exchange student. I have been here for one week. I can't adapt to Chicago's life completely, which is very different with from China. But there's the people are very nice and friendly. I like them. And I also like the buildings in Chicago, which are very beautiful and magnificent, moreover and have a sense of history.
I hope I will have a nice life in the next few months in Chicago. Of courses,now my first task is to improveing my English.

<em>Great job, Wendy! The third sentence you have two options, you can say (a) "I began learning English when I was 13 years old" or (b) "Since I was 13 years old, I have been learning English." (Or, it would be even better to say "I have been learning English since I was 13 years old."</em>

Be very careful to make sure you always put a space ". " after periods (.) and commas (,) -- this will make your writing much easier to read, and make you look much more professional. 

Good luck!