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My family I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR HELP, PLEASE BE FREE TO CORRECT ANY MISTAKE YOU SEE. My name is Jose, I live in Seville in Spain. My mother's name is Rocio and my father's name is Jose too. She left working three years ago, before that, she was a shop assistant in El Corteinglés, a very famous mall here in Spain. She is 63 years old. My father is retired too, he had a lot of jobs, like guard in a shopping center or police but maybe the job that defines him the most was maintenance of electrical appliance , he repaired it. He is 67 years old. I love them both very much, every day, we love to watch a game show that makes funny questions to people and we try to answer it. Until seven years ago we lived with my older sister too, now she has her own home with her husband and their two daughters, my nieces, I love them so much... My sister is 32 years old and works as phone operator in a company that sell mineral water to other companies. Almost every saturday we meet at my home for dinner, previously I play with my nieces and watch movies with them, then my family and me talk about how the week was. I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR HELP, PLEASE BE FREE TO CORRECT ANY MISTAKE YOU SEE.

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My family

I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR HELP, PLEASE BE FEEL FREE TO CORRECT ANY MISTAKES YOU SEE.

My name is Jose, I live in Seville, in Spain. My mother's name is Rocio and my father's name is also Jose. She My mom left stopped working three years ago;, before that, she was a shop assistant in El Corteinglés, a very famous mall here in Spain. She is 63 years old. My father is retired too., hHe had a lot of different jobs, like as a guard in a shopping center, or and as a policeman but maybe the job that defines him the most was maintenance of electrical appliance, he repaired it. He is 67 years old.


I love them both very much., eEvery day, we love to watch a game show that makes asks people funny questions to people and we try to answer themit.

Up until seven years ago, we lived with my older sister too, but now she has her own home with her husband and their two daughters, my nieces, I love them so much... My sister is 32 years old and works as phone operator in a company that sells mineral water to other companies.

Almost every sSaturday we meet at my home for dinner, previously first I play with my nieces and watch movies with them, then my family and me I talk about how the week was.

 

Great job! Good luck with your English :)

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