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A Book I Could Not Put Down
This is just my short reaction to the book after I finish it. THANK YOU to help me correct it.
The Christmas story in the end of the book is very literary and well written. I am enlightened by its religious moral how the man suddenly turned on a light switch through three times of his attempts to catch the bird that had flown into the window from the deadly and freezing cold again and again. It seemingly pictures that we may not get the GOD's sense immediately at the first second. We always tend to find out the truth and grace after more than one failure before the bird flipping out of our reach flew off. The author has made me a little bit disappointed by setting the man to realize the true belief by himself or by the experience of his own instead of the help from his wife since I was expecting something significant to happen with her because the author spent a lot of words and time to introduce the man's wife at the beginning of the story about how she persisted in celebrating holidays in God's way opposite to her husband. Anyway, that's only my understanding or perspective which does not relegate the article at all.
May God work on the light switch of my mind and dwell his holy spirit on me for a long time.
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May 4, 2014
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Do we have any context.
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May 3, 2014
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I can't fall asleep.
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May 3, 2014
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I think translations above are Great.
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May 3, 2014
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The former one is a noun.And the latter is a verb.