中国的米饭
作天我们去了我的阿姨的家一起吃饭，给贡，为圣诞节。说话我们的大学样。又我表姐又我的学期好了，但是这学期是我的最难还。那里菜好看，不过蛋糕太甜结束吃。我告诉他们两月以前我吃过中国菜第一。说不定最好米饭的我吃过。他们告诉我他们没一直吃过中国菜。
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I think it will be more easily understandable with it in English too. You are doing great.
BTW, why is your name TWO which sounds not like a name actually? Don't let my curiosity kill the cat. lol.
加油，努力学习中文，你一定会成功，有志者事竟成。
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Thanks Bingbing, I will remember to post the English next time!
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中国的米饭
昨天我们去了我的阿姨的家一起吃饭，为圣诞节交换礼物。聊我们的大学。又我表姐和我的学期都通过了，但是这学期还是我最难的一学期。那里的菜看起来很好，不过最后的蛋糕太甜。我告诉他们，两个月以前我吃过第一名的中国菜。说不定我吃过最好的米饭。他们告诉我他们一直没吃过中国菜。0
中国的米饭
作天我们去了我的阿姨的家一起吃饭，给贡，为圣诞节。说话我们的大学样。又我表姐又我的学期好了，但是这学期是我的最难还。那里菜好看，不过蛋糕太甜结束吃。我告诉他们两月以前我吃过中国菜第一。说不定最好米饭的我吃过。他们告诉我他们没一直吃过中国菜。-----------------------
昨天我去阿姨家过圣诞节，我们互相赠送礼物，并一起吃饭。后来我们聊到了学习，这学期表姐过的都很好，但是却是我比较难的一个学期。他们的菜很好看，不过蛋糕太甜，我就没有怎么吃。我跟他们说，两个月以前吃过一次中国菜，那是我吃过的最好的米饭。他们告诉我说，其实他们也不是一直都吃中国菜。
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Two, great. It would be better if you could post the writing along with English. I think people from China will understand your meaning better If you do that. Then you can get more corrections. This is just my own thoughts. You can ask me if you have any questions. Gook luck.O(∩_∩)O
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