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[Is this the proper answer for the question:
Please describe what skills and knowledge you hope to gain during each of the following stages of your training in the U.S? ; Please include how you will attain these goals:
"Through rotations through several departments and/or research work" ?] (I don't think this is the answer they are looking for. Always use complete sentences when answering these types of questions, it will help you understand what they are asking. For example, the question here you would answer like this: "During the stages of my training in the U.S., I hope to gain..." and then you would give your answer, which would list the skills and knowledge you hope to gain. Then, for the second part of the question, you would say "I hope to attain these goals by..." and then you would use the answer you have written down already. I would say: "...through rotations rotating through several departments and/or and doing research work." Of course, this part of the answer also depends on what you have said in the first part. Research work may not be related at all to what you said when they asked you about your goals. So in the end, the answer would look something like this: "During the stages of my training in the U.S., I hope to gain _____, _____, and _____. I hope to attain these goals by ______, ______, and _____.")

4. Since the host company does a wide range of business, I think it is important to understand the business of other work done in all of its departments. At the moment, I am have been asked to do some general job beside designing works (this needs to be more specific-- find out the actual job title instead of saying "some general job." When you say that and you also say "besides designing works," it comes across as rude to the company), so I will try to learn the business of other departments proactively and in the process hope to improve my business skill.

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<em>[You say "try" a lot. Please don't do this. When writing to an employer or teacher it is better to simply say "I will", because trying is not good enough. This was very well written, and the mistakes you made are mistakes that some native speakers also make. The corrections I made were mostly on sentence structure, and are intended to improve the clarity of what you are trying to express. I made a big effort to make everything sound professional. I could probably help more if I saw the questions you were answering. Best of luck to you.]</em>

Essay for the internship

*my notes to you are in blue

*corrections are in pink

I'm writing essays("essays," is correct!) for my internship. I would appreciate it if you could correct them. It's too long so I divided into two posts.

1. I have been studying business English using TOEIC text books (for how long? I think that is worth mentioning right here- "I have been studying business English using TOEIC text books for ___ years,), and trying to reading English books or and articles on the internet which are written in English. I also use Youtube (how much? you could say "frequently," here- "I also frequently use Youtube...") to improve my listening skill, at the same time I which helps me learn more about American culture.
Besides (improper use of the word "besides") Meanwhile, I am brushing up on my design skills. I mainly have doing done web designing so far, but at the internship I will be in charge of advertising design, booth designing, and some CAD skill will be required as well, so I am practicing those these things skills to enable me to adopt to the broad works(←幅広い業務 に対応出来るように、と言いたい OK, got it. What you were meaning to say is "a wider range of business," but in this case I think what you wanted to communicate is that you are practicing your skills to enable you to support a wider range of business, as opposed to adopt a wider range of business. May I suggest that instead you say "...so I am practicing these skills to enable me to reach a higher level of ease and familiarity so that I am able to adapt to a wider range of positions to support the company,"?).

2. I would like to get a firm grasp on the range of my work during the initial internship period. I will be accepted as a trainee who is responsible for many types of design work, so at first I will I would first like to identify my role in the company.

3. I do not have enough very much experience of working in a team, and I have scheduled almost everything things by myself until now,. so I will try need to get used to working in team during this period. I will try to contribute for to the team with a positive attitude (maybe here you could add "and mindful work ethic.")

Have u you ever love loved somebody deeply?.But you but married others another person in the end?

It is A a sad thing in life is when you meet someone who means a lot to you, only to find out in the end that it was never meant to be and you just have to let go. Have u you ever love loved somebody deeply? Maybe you have been together for yeas. years. You can not imagine your life without her/him. them, But but in the end, you married others in the end. What happened to come to that made you reach this decision.?

<em>[This entry was very good and very easy to understand. A native English speaker would understand exactly what you were saying if they read this. Most of the clean-up I did was on sentence structure, trying to make your entry flow better. Remember to put spaces after a comma, period, question mark, or exclamation mark, as I have done here. When you said "a sad thing in life," saying "in life," is redundant. Letting go is obviously a thing in life, so it sounds a bit awkward when you say it. To answer the question in the entry, yes I have loved someone very deeply but ended up engaged to another person. We both loved each other very deeply, but at the time there were too many things preventing us from being together, and his love for me did not endure it. I love someone else now, someone that I could never imagine leaving, who feels the same way about me. I think that is true love-- when one person will do whatever their partner asks because they completely trust their partner and know they would do the same for them if they asked.]</em>

I want to talk in Enghish English

I want to know meet friends that speak Enghish English.

<em>[I can help!]</em>

A new semester is coming

It is time to studied study english. There This is the last oppotunity for me to pass the cet CET 6 in college, because since I am a senior, and will be graduating soon. I will vaule value the last year. Time to study, gogo!

[Remember to put spaces between commas and periods, as I have done here. Wonderful job, stay enthusiastic!]

I am looking for english speakers to practice my speaking by skype

I am looking for english speakers to practice my speaking by on skype. In changing exchange, I can help you if you are learning the italian Italian.

<em>[I can help!]</em>