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first entry
This is my first entry ever on Italki so I will not try to write about something academic. I want to let you know something about myself and my future plans.
First of all, I am a Vietnamese native speaker. I am studying in a prestigious high school in Ho Chi Minh City. Since I was a little boy, I have always dreamed that I could be able to set my foot on an English-speaking country and have a chance to study there. Therefore, I started to learn English to make it come true.
Until now, it still remains just a dream. However, nothing can stop me pursuing it.
[Very good English, great attitude.]
first entry
This is my first entry ever on Italki, so I will not try to write about something academic. I want to let tell you know something about myself and my future plans.
First of all, I am a Vietnamese native speaker. I am studying in a prestigious highschool in Ho Chi Minh City. Since I was a little boy, I have always dreamed of that I could be able to setting my foot on in an English-speaking country and to have a chance to study there. Therefore, I started to learning English to make it my dream come true.
Until now, It it still remains far a dream. However, nothing can stop me pursuing it.
[Great job! I tried to simplify some of your thoughts and make them sound native. Where you said "however," most native speakers would have said "but," although you did use "however," correctly. Very inspiring entry! Keep going :) ]
First entry
This is my first entry ever on Italki so I will not try to write about something academic. I want to let you know something about myself and my future plans.
First of all, I am a Vietnamese native speaker. I am studying in a prestigious highschool in Ho Chi Minh City. Since I was a little boy, I have always dreamed that I could be able to set my foot on an English-speaking country and have a chance to study there. Therefore, I started to learn English to make it come true.
Until now, it still remainsed a far away dream. However, nothing can stop me pursuing it.
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