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I'm vikky from China doing international business now. I wanna to make more friends from all over the world and share interesting things with you. Would you like to be my friend?
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    我是谁?

    我 叫 Doris。
    我 二十三岁了。
    我住在菲律宾 。
    我是学生 和 我晚上十点上班。
    我住跟我的家庭住在一起。
    我有妈妈但没有爸爸。
    我有哥哥和妹妹。
    我没有姐姐。
    我想要有姐姐。
    我爱我哥哥,我更好爱我妹妹, 但是我最好爱我妈妈 因为她会做菜。

    我喜欢猫和狗。
    我有三个只小的猫和一个只大的狗。
    他们很可爱!
    我爱他们都 。

    我要去香港 。 (want to go or will go to?)
    他们说广东话但是我没学习 过广东话。
    我学习普通话因为很多人都说普通话。
    我回会说一 点儿汉 语。普通话很难.

    我今天很累因为我今天很忙。
    再见!
    谢谢 你!

     

     

    Hi Doris,Good job, it will be better if less “我”

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    More practice!

    Ni hao italki community!
    Jin tian wo practiced shuo Hanyu. Fluenz is the laoshi I use. I can download the program on my computer, its very helpful
    Ming tian wo practice bikram yoga. Wo xihuan yoga. Wo ye xihuan to work out. Danshi wo yao a personal trainer, and he makes me work out very hard. Mei tian shang wu wo run by Lake Michigan along the street lake shore drive. Shang wu wo ai ni.

    Xie xie nin,
    Tiana

     

    zai yi ci lian xi 

    ni men hao, italki de peng you!

    jin tian wo lian xi shuo han yu。 wo de lao shi shi Fluenz。wo ke yi zai dian nao shang xia zai cheng xu, ta dui wo you hen da de bang zhu。

    ming tian wo hui lian xi gao wen yu jia。wo xi huan yu jia。wo ye xi huan jian shen。 dan shi wo you yi ge si ren jiao lian, ta dui wo hen yan ge。 mei tian shang wu wo zai huan mi xie gen hu de jie dao shang kuang ben。 wo ai ni, shang wu。

     

     

    xie xie nin,

    Tiana

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    最近我头脑里的一切都混乱起来了。。。 有很多很多话要说,但却说不出口。所以
    我试着写了这首 '诗句' 。。。(是)关于过去的一件事。。

    迷失在自己的脑海里,
    陷入沉思, 痛定思痛...
    我以为过 只 要有 你
    我才能(带我)飞到无边的天空...

    我以为没有错过选择那条路,
    倒是(却)在半路上走失了, 消失了感觉.
    那是谁..假装满不在乎,
    谁闯进我的心而颠倒了我的世界…

    我(是)在高高飞(翔), 还是徘徊在黑暗中…
    把一切弄乱了, 我已分不出
    哪里是地狱, 哪里 是灿烂的天空.
    谁使(让)我受(伤)害, (却)连一句话都没有说而(就)逃出(走)...

    我为什么苦苦回忆, 放不下那些过去.. (这里是想说哪个意思呢:1,为什么我总是苦苦回忆,放不下那些过去;2,我为什么苦苦回忆,因为放不下那些过去)
    现在这一刻 我为何如此无能为力?
    我从哪里来, 我是谁, 要往哪里去?.. (这个地方我觉得颠倒一下顺序比较好:我是谁,从哪里来,要往哪里去?)
    (这)一切是否正确, 还是(只是)一个错误而已...

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    请告诉我,你们能懂我的意思吗?

     

     

    能看懂 挺好的

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    July 28, 2013
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    Good night Good night~ Dear friends all over the world, I will go for sleep. Wish myself a great dream.
    July 27, 2013
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    Where should I go?? Hi everyone, I'm vikky. I have graduated from university for more than a year, and now I'm working as a sale in an import and export corporation which located in a small county, I like people here, but I hate the working condition,I haven't sold one steel pipe, what I did seems meaningless. Actually I prefer to go to graduate school, to study in Beijing Foreign Studies University(BFSU),that's my dream, but it's difficult for me according to my level now, especially I am working. I feel sorry to this company if I resigned because I haven't creat profits for company, but I don't want to put down my dream, I also afraid it is wasting time to prepare for graduate exams, I'm 23 now, the age of a girl should to marry somebody in Chinese counties. So could someone give me some advises? Thanks!
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