My ex

I have an ex who is living deep in my heart. I know it's common for a 23-year girl, but I still want to share this experience with you.
He is my high school classmate. We fell in love with each other during sophomore year, but we lived in different cities and saw each other only once a month.
I have to say, I never thought of marrying him at the begining, but as time passed by I found I depended on him heavily, and came to want to marry him strongly.

Approaching graduation, I was preparing for the postgraduate exams, while I felt he was becoming busier and busier. He called me scarcely and everytime I got answers like: "You should go study" or "I'm busy now". At first, I thought he was being considerate everytime he answered me like that, but then I realized there was something wrong, so I asked him if he had no feelings for me, but he denied it.

The tension increased day by day until I went to visit him in spite of his opposition. I learned terrible news that he had another girlfriend. We broke up and I cried for a whole night.

After breaking up, I attempted to forget all about him. I shared my time with friends and tried to be happy everyday.

After three months, my ex found me and begged me to forgive him. He finally convinced me, and we got together again, but we were still living apart.


Four months ago, he asked to separate a second time. I accepted without needing a reason, because I know he is no longer the man I once loved.

-I think your main issue is tense. You're talking about something that happened in the past, but you're switching between past and present tense. A problem even for native english speakers.